Homework: write a composition
某中学英语报开设了“人物介绍”栏目，请根据一下 内容，为该栏目写一篇介绍阿里巴巴集团的创始人马云 的英文稿件。内容要点如下： 1.1964年9月10日出生于中国浙江省杭州市 2.曾经两次高考失败，1988年毕业于杭州师范学院 3.1995年，马云创办中国黄页，被广泛认为是中国第一 家互联网公司 4.1999年创办阿里巴巴，为来自200个国家和地区的会 员提供服务 5.马云的成功来自于对所做事业的坚持
注意：字数100左右 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯 参考词汇：中国黄页：China Yellow Pages 杭州师范学院：Hangzhou Normal University
Ma Yun is the founder, chairman and CEO of Alibaba Group. _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
There are 16 students here, most of whom have passed the test. 6. 他下载了一些歌， 其中有四首很 好听。 He downloaded some songs, four of which were very sweet.
rewriting Our class is a big family. It consists of 15 boys and 50
参考范文：
Ma Yun, who was born in Hangzhou, Zhejiang province on September 10, 1964, is the founder, chairman and CEO of Alibaba Group. Ma Yun failed the college entrance examination twice and then managed to enter Hangzhou Normal University and graduated in 1988. In 1995, he founded China Yellow Pages, which was widely believed to be China’s first Internet company. After years of hard work, he founded Alibaba in 1999, which is so successful that it servers members from more than 200 countries and areas.
rewriting
Our class is a big family, which consists of 15 boys and 50 girls, most of whom are from countryside. Zhong is our monitor, who is always strict to us. Meanwhile she is ready to help those who have difficulties. Her warmth and kindness make our class an united community.
came back yesterday.
which in East China, 11. Shanghai, _______is is developing quickly.
whom/who 12. My mother, __________ you met last year, is a business woman. As we had expected , he failed in 14._____ the exam.
when first 5. I still remember the day _______I
came to Beijing.
where 6. This is the place _______ I live. who 7. His father, ________ works in Beijing,
8. 她没有交作业的原因
the reason why she didn’t hand in the homework
1.不努力学习的学生很难通过考试。
翻 译 句 子
The students who don’t study hard will not easy to pass the exam. 2.她上周买的房子非常好看。 The house which she bought last week is very nice .
Review先行词源自who She is the girl _______ lives next door.
关系词 Attributive clause
关系词
关系代词 that which who/whom/ whose as 关系副词 when why where
which/that 1.A plane is a machine ___________can fly . who/whom/that/ 2.The woman _________ you saw in the park is our English teacher . whose 3. I saw a woman _______bag was stolen. why 4. The reason ______he was late was that he got up late.
限定性定语从句VS非限定性定语从句
•This is the book(that/which) I lost yesterday.
形式上
意义上
译法上
关系词
这就是他昨天丢的那本书
•The book, which he lost yesterday, has been found.
那本书已经找到了，是他昨天丢的那本。
配色方案
非限制性 定语从句
非限定性定语从句翻译时通常译成一个 并列句，其形式往往可以用and…替换。 He said that he had never seen her before, which was not true.
他说他以前从来没有见过她，这不是真的。
He said that he had never seen her before, and this was not true.
3. 我仍然记得我第一次去学校的日子。 I still remember the day when I first went to school.
4. 正如我们预料的那样，她又迟到 了。 As we had expected, she was late again.
5. 这里有16个学生，他们大多数都通过 了考试。
4.矗立在河边的楼房
The building which stands by the river 5.一位皮包被偷了的女士
a woman whose bag was stolen
6. 我们在农场工作的开心日子 the happy time when we worked on the farm
7.她工作的地方 the place where she works
I met a friend, and he invited me to his house.
改 写 句 子
I met a friend, who invited me to his house. Learning is one’s own business, and it can not rely on others. Learning is one’s own business, which can not rely on others.
My sister is a college student, who is studying in Peking University. I will never forget the days when I visited this university last summer. She showed me around to see the various facilities, including the library which attracts me very much. There are more than ten thousand college students, all of whom are fighting for their promising future, which I have never thought before. She is a model from whom I will learn, I am determined to study hard to repay my parents and teachers who are working hard for me.
限定性定语从句VS非限定性定语从句
区别 形式上 意义上 译法上 关系词使 用上
限制性定 不用逗号隔 是先行词不 译成先行词 作宾语时可 开 的定语 可缺少的部 省略；可用 语从句
that 分，如若删 去，意思不 完整 用逗号隔开 只对先行词 通常译成与 不可省略； 进行补充说 主句并列的 不可用that 明，如删去，分句
which
girls. Most of them are from countryside. Zhong is
whom
our monitor, she is always strict to us.