2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误
3) Who is responsible for this department? Be responsible for 通常指对某件事的后果负 责。如果指对某一方面的工作或某一部分 的工作负责，就不能用这个搭配。 Who is in charge of this department?
1.误解词义导致的用词错误
4) Please fetch/take me some water when you return this afternoon. • Fetch表示的是“去拿来”，表示来回而不 是单程。Take表示“拿走”。从该句的意 思看来，指单程“拿来”。 4) Please bring me some water when you return this afternoon.
四级作文写作
常见写作错误
Contents
• 5种用词错误分析 • 6种常见句子错误分析
5种用词错误分析
• • • • • 1) 误解词义导致的用词错误 2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误 3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误 4) 误用词性导致的错误 5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误
1.误解词义导致的用词错误
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 1） My teacher adviced me not to go out alone at night • 2) She doesn’t aware of the importance of the study of English. • 3) Many people present at the meeting. • 4) To do this beyond my power. • 5) This road goes straightly from our school to the center of the city.
1.误解词义导致的用词错误
• 5) It is uneasy for the children to do such a thing. • Uneasy是由前缀un-加词根easy构成，在古英语 中有表示“不容易”的意思，但在现代英语中， uneasy 已经不表示easy的反义“不容易”了，而 是“心神不安”的意思。 • 5) It is difficult for the children to do such a thing.
There are jobs more dangerous than truck driving, for instance, training lions.
2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误
• 就英语单词本身而言，每一个单词都是符 合英语习惯的，问题在于词与词之间的搭 配上。 • 在写作时，对惯用法的使用要加倍小心， 平时对自己不熟悉或拿不准的习语要认真 查证，才能杜绝非惯用法的用词错误。
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 5) This road goes straightly from our school to the center of the city.
• 5) This road goes straight from our school to the center of the city.
3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误
• 3) he will come in the event that it stops raining • He will come if it stops raining.
3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误
• 自然、简练、清楚、明白 • 有限时间用于掌握核心词汇 • 熟练掌握最常用词来充分表达自己的思想
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 形容词具有动作含义，当它们做表语时， 千万不要忘记加连系动词。 • 注意带有动作含义的介/副词（组） • 注意使用前、后缀后的词性变化
5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误
• Excessive smoking will injure your body. • Through inquiry, we learn that he was elected to a new leading post. • We are going to visit the exhibition next week. • In the basketball game, our team won the British team • We all enjoy public medical care.
5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误
• Excessi body. • Excessive smoking will injure your health.
5) 用汉语思维导致的用词错误
• Through inquiry, we learn that he was elected to a new leading post. • On inquiry, we learn that he was elected to a new leading post. • on inquiry 经询问;经调查
3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误
• 1）I comprehended his statement. • 2) while we are eating breakfast, we engaged in an animated conversation. • 3) he will come in the event that it stops raining
2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误
4) She will probably be elected woman chairman. Woman chairman, 是一个词语搭配问题。一般来说，在表示 职业的名词前加上man或woman可以区别男女。如a woman doctor, a woman writer等。但是“女主席”“女 writer 议长”“女诗人”等则不能用woman做定语。另外，英语 中某些固定搭配，决不可随便改变其结构或任意添加、省 略其中的某些成分，否则就会造成不符合惯用表达的用词 错误。 She will probably be elected chairwoman.
3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误
• 1）I comprehended his statement. • 1）I understood what he said.
3) 大词小词滥用导致的错误
• 2) while we are eating breakfast, we engaged in an animated conversation. • While eating breakfast, we have a lovely talk
2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误
5) There are jobs more dangerous than truck driving, for an instance, training lions. • For an instance不符合英语习惯用法。英语中 “举例”的固定说法是for example和for instance。虽然只举一个例子，也不能使用冠词 a/an
• 形容词误用为动词
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 3) Many people present at the meeting. • 3) Many people were present at the meeting. • 形容词误用为动词
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 4) To do this beyond my power. • 4) To do this is beyond my power.
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 1） My teacher adviced me not to go out alone at night • 1） My teacher advised me not to go out alone at night • 名词误用为动词
4) 误用词性导致的错误
• 2) She doesn’t aware of the importance of the study of English. • 2) She isn’t aware of the importance of the study of English.
1.误解词义导致的用词错误
• 2）Both salt and sugar are easy to melt in hot water. • melt 常指物体经过加热后熔化或者易溶物 质受热溶化，不指溶质在溶剂中溶解 • Both salt and sugar are easy to dissolve in hot water.
1）The young man always puts on leather shoes. 2）Both salt and sugar are easy to melt in hot water. 3) They persuaded their son to try again, but he just turned a deaf ear to them. 4) Please fetch/take me some water when you return this afternoon. 5) It is uneasy for the children to do such a thing.
• 分辨同义词近义词的细微差别是避免发生 错误的主要途径。 • 选用自己完全掌握了词义或用法的单词或 词组进行写作。
2) 不符合习惯导致的用词错误
1) We all hope him to get the first prize. 2) Mr. Smith denied my invitation to a dinner party. 3) Who is responsible for this department? 4) She will probably be elected woman chairman. 5) There are jobs more dangerous than truck driving, for an instance, training lions.