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信息67 信息67 曹青 & 李乔BBS and College StudentsNowadays, with the popularization of computers among college students, BBS has become indispensable part of their life. BBS is the abbreviation of bulletin board system. Its main function is to enable people to communicate on “boards”. Each authorized person can post articles on boards, or just reply other people’s posts. Students can discuss all kinds of topics on it, serious or easy. It can keep the students well-informed of the current events happening both in the world and on campus. What’s more, they can not only discuss and exchange opinions through BBS, but also make friends, sell and buy second-hand products. It serves as a splendid.information center for college students. However, just as the saying goes: No garden without weeds. Not to mention the garden of BBS. It is not immune to some illegal and nasty information. For example, you always can see advertisements about looking for a substitute examinee on BBS. Besides, some students have spent so much time on posting on BBS that they even forgot eating and sleeping, which results in many adverse consequences. Anyhow, BBS indeed provides fertile soil for critical thinking, and encourages free speech of college students. Therefore, we should work together to make BBS a better place for communication.Main Points of the Article题目分析:观点论证型+校园话题校园话题+提纲作文题目分析:观点论证型校园话题提纲作文写作思路:本文围绕大学生使用BBS的情况展开论述。

此类的情况展开论述。

写作思路:本文围绕大学生使用的情况展开论述作文通常要在第一段指出当今社会的某种现象或者事物,作文通常要在第一段指出当今社会的某种现象或者事物,并用简洁的话加以描述;用简洁的话加以描述;第二段要求详述该现象或事物的特点或产生的原因,可以运用举例方法;结尾要表明自己的观点。

或产生的原因,可以运用举例方法;结尾要表明自己的观点。

高分精点: 高分精点 (1)紧扣提纲,重点阐述(第二、三段),观点鲜明;紧扣提纲,),观点鲜明紧扣提纲重点阐述(第二、三段),观点鲜明; (2)遣词造句富于变化;遣词造句富于变化;遣词造句富于变化 (3)写作方法多样,如举例、引用、比喻。

写作方法多样,写作方法多样如举例、引用、比喻。

Main Points of the Article高分词句:与本文开头类似的句式还有:高分词句:与本文开头类似的句式还有:With the rapid improvement in…/ growing awareness of…, more and more…等。

等不受…影响短语 be immune to…“不受影响”用在上下文中很形象。

不受影响”用在上下文中很形象。

谚语的引用:谚语的引用:No garden without weeds. (没有不长草没有不长草的园子)。

的园子。

比喻的妙用:和前文的谚语相对应,比喻的妙用:fertile soil 和前文的谚语相对应,增加了文章可读性。

章可读性。

Some Complicated WordsBBS (Bulletin Board System) 电子公告板Popularization n.普及 n.普及 Indispensable adj.不可缺少的, 绝对必要的 adj.不可缺少的不可缺少的, abbreviation n.缩写, 缩写词 n.缩写缩写, authorized adj.权威认可的 adj.权威认可的 splendid adj.壮丽的, 辉煌的, 极好的 adj.壮丽的辉煌的, 壮丽的,Some Complicated Wordsno garden without weeds 没有无杂草的花园immune adj.免疫的 adj. nasty adj.污秽的 adj.污秽的 substitute examinee 替考者adverse consequences 不良后果 fertile adj.肥沃的 adj.肥沃的四、六级作文可用的常见谚语格言1. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。

2. God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。

3. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。

4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

5. One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘,谬之千里。

6. Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。

7. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。

8. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。

9. All work and no play make jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。

10. Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。

11. More hasty, less speed. 欲速则不达。

12. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。

It’13. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。

14. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下。

15. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。

16. Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。

17. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。

18. Well begun, half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。

19. It is hard to please all. 众口难调。

20. Out of sight, out of mind. 眼不见,心不念。

21. Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。

22. Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。

23. First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。

24. Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。

25. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。

26. Live not to eat, but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭,吃饭为了活着。

27. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。

28. East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29. It's not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。

30. Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。

31. Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。

32. The older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。

33. Do as Romans do in Rome. 入乡随俗。

34. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

35. As the tree, so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。

36. To live is to learn, to learn is to better live.活着 live.活着为了学习,学习为了更好的活着。

避免四级垃圾词汇:相信大家都有这样的感受,明明是背了很多的单词,可写作文时,总是用一些高中或小学的词汇(又称垃圾词汇)。

为了更好的克服这样的情况,我总结了一些常用的替代语,希望对大家有所帮助:垃圾词汇1:help 垃圾词汇1典型例句:I’ll help you. 典型例句:I 替代语:accomodate 替代语:accomodate e.g.: I’ll endeavour to accomodate you. 垃圾词汇2 垃圾词汇2:helpful 典型例句:sth is helpful (to sb) 典型例句:sth 替代语:conducive 替代语:conducive e.g.: sth is conducive to sb. 鉴于有些作文多关于道德和品格塑造,再给出两个有用的短语:timetime-honored 时代赋予的 do credit to our forbears 继承先辈的优秀传统垃圾词汇3 垃圾词汇3:show 典型例句:as it shows in the picture 典型例句:as 替代语:betray 替代语:betray 垃圾词汇4 垃圾词汇4:think 典型例句:I think 典型例句:I 替代语:deem 替代语:deem 垃圾词汇5 垃圾词汇5:ugly 典型例句:xxx is ugly 典型例句:xxx 替代语:hideous 替代语:hideous垃圾词汇6:by the way 垃圾词汇6典型例句:by 典型例句:by the way,……替代语:incidentally,……替代语:incidentally,……垃圾词汇7 垃圾词汇7:because 典型例句:xxx 典型例句:xxx because xxx 替代语:in 替代语:in that/in as much as 垃圾词汇8 垃圾词汇8:consider 典型例句:We 典型例句:We must consider xxx 替代语:allow 替代语:allow for e.g: We must allow for xxx 垃圾词汇9 垃圾词汇9:much 典型例句: There has been a much increase in the world population 替代语:There 替代语:There has been a drastic increase in the 垃圾词汇10:垃圾词汇10:about 典型例句:It 典型例句:It is about 250 times of that 替代语:It 替代语:It is approximately --垃圾词汇11:垃圾词汇11:buy 替代语:purchase 替代语:purchase只要我们每天积累1 个短语,1 只要我们每天积累1-2个短语,1-2 个月后,我们的作文水平一定会有质的飞跃。

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