Paper A:Learning guide plan(导学案)广元市The writing task:据一项调查显示，大多数的中学生每天的睡眠时间少于7小时，有些甚至不到6个小时，请你就此现象从以下方面写一篇英语短文。
1. 分析中学生睡眠不足的原因。
2.提出你的看法。
注意：词数120词左右。
【Learning aims】1.学习写作的基本步骤。
2.掌握一篇好的英语作文应具备的基本特征，掌握社会现象解释类议论文的写作模板。
3.通过本堂课的学习，能使自己的写作水平有所提升。
能获得一定的成就感，从而喜欢写作。
【Learning difficulties and importance】如何在小组活动中发挥积极作用，如何通过预习获取教师上课时的重点信息。
Ⅰ．Self-preview（自主预习）Steps for writing1.审题：审体裁；审人称；审时态；审写作要求（包括字数和参考词汇）2.列提纲：按照写作要求，列出要点，确定文章的层或段。
3.连词成句：在各要点之间加上适当的连接词，连句成段，连段成篇。
4.复查纠错：把已写成的文章阅读一遍，发现错误，及时纠正。
1. Task1：审题：1) 体裁：这是一篇____________文。
2) 人称：______________ 3) 时态:___________ 2.Task2:List the outline of your composition(列出你的作文提纲,用中文)Para1.现状__________________________________________________________ Para2.原因：1.______________________________________________________2.______________________________________________________3.______________________________________________________ Para3.自己的观点和建议：观点：______________________________________________________建议：1._____________________________________________________2._____________________________________________________3._____________________________________________________结束语:______________________________________________________3. Task3:List the key words and expressions you may use:（列出你会使用到的关键的单词和表达）_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________4．Task4:Make a draft.(写出这篇作文的草稿，尽力使语言正确，要点齐全，行文连贯) _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Ⅱ.Questions for preview（预习疑惑）_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________Ⅲ.Improve your draft:_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________Paper B:Ⅰ．Outline:Opening para：学生睡眠的现状Body：睡眠不足的原因Closing para：自己的观点和建议Ⅱ．Key pointsPara1. 据调查，大多数的中学生每天的睡眠时间少于7小时，有些甚至不到6个小时Para2. 原因1. 家庭作业太多, 后果2. 老师、家长过于重视学生成绩而不是健康3. 部分学生的不良生活习惯… …Para3. 观点、建议1. 学生应该保证充足睡眠，原因… …2.建议：减少作业量；提高教、学效率；改掉不良生活习惯… …Ⅲ．Expressions:para1:According to a recent survey/ A recent survey shows that…; have less than 7 hours’ sleep; no more than 6 hoursPara2:What’s the reason for…/There are several reasons accounting for（导致）this phenomenon（现象）./There are chiefly…reasons for it.For one thing…./ First of all…/Firstly…/To start (begin) with…be burdened with …；be faced with… ; be busy doing…bury themselves in… / be absor bed in…;For another…/Besides…/ In addition…/Moreover…/What’s more…pay more attention to … rather than…; be of great harm to /do damage to /have a bad effect on…（Apart from the above reasons….lack a good lifestyle; stay up late doing…; which also contribute to a lack of sleep）Para3:As we all know/ As is known to all…good sleep…essential/ of great importance to / fundamental…In order to… improve ….living and study conditions; take measures without delay/ immediately…First/ First of all / To start with/ To begin with/ On the one hand…give…less homework /relieve the students from great pressureSecond/ Besides/ Moreover/ What’s more / On the other hand…Find a better way to teach and learn/ improve the teaching and learning efficiency（效率）Finally/ Last but not least（get rid of …/ form a good living habit/ develop a good living habit…Only….can we ….）Ⅳ. What makes a good composition?Structure:1.Is the essay divided into parts?2. Does each part have a topic sentence?Content:1. are all the key points stated?2. Is everything to the point?(切题)Language: 1. Does the writer use any linking words?2. Are there any mistakes?3. Is there any advanced vocabulary(高级词汇)4. Are there any good sentence patterns(句式)?范文：①A recent survey shows that most of the middle school stud ents only have l ess than 7 hours’ sl eep each day, some even no more than 6 hours, which is much l ess than required.What is the reason for this phenomenon? Mainly there are several reasons behind the situation. ②First of all, the students are burd ened with too much homework. They have to bury themselves in d oing homework. ③Another important reason is that schools and parents pay more attention on their grad es rather than their health. But , in fact, this will be of great harm to their health.In ord er to improve the stud ents’ living and study conditions, measures shoul d be taken without d elay. ⑤First, give the stud ents l ess homework. ⑥Second, find a better way to teach and l earn. ⑦Last but not l east, improving the teaching and l earning efficiency is the best policy.Ⅳ.模板According to a recent survey, 85% percent of students____________________(说明现状).There are ____ reasons accounting for this phenomenon. First of all/ For one thing,________________(理由一). Besides,/For another, _________________(理由二). What is more,/ In addition___________________（理由三）. It’s natural that________(引起的后果)In order to _______(改变现状)，measures should be taken without deny. On the one hand ___________(措施一). On the other hand, _________(措施二). Last but not least,_______(措施三)Only ______ can ________.(结束语)。