一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。
操作难度★★ 写作效果★★
• 1. You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it.
• Either you or I must do it.
If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般)
• what a clever girl she is!
四、将陈述句改为倒装句。
操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★
• 1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.
• Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.
第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等） 超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖 了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预 期目的。
第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务， 有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。
第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只 是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白 写什么。
• 2.He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
• 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
• 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.
• 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量 英语水平的一个重要标志。
词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装
四
1、词组优先原则
项
2、地道原则。
原
3、避免重复原则
则
4、后、高、长原则—
后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
1、词组优先原则
［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown. ［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
• Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever • →smart • →wise • →bright • →intelligent
• 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。
• puters are very important in our life.
• puters play a very important role in our life.
2、地道原则
［原文］Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
三、 将陈述句改为感叹句。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★
1. To prevent the pollution is very important．
How
！
2. She is a clever girl．
What
!
• How important it is to prevent the pollution!
• 2. 定语从句 （限制性/ 非限制性）
1) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its slogan is One World, One Dream,
• The 2008 Olympic Games,
.
Whose slogan is One World, One Dream ,will be held in BJ 2) In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are
思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇 好作文
• 无遗漏信息点（审题） • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词
• 句式多样
• 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
思考：你能想到的好句式有哪 些？
advanced sentences
定语从句 名词性从句 非谓语动词
with复合结构 常用谚语 倒装句
强调句 被动句 …
化腐朽为神奇十 式
She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级)
Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(一般)
A good idea occurred to me.
/ A good idea suddenly struck me(高级)
0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。
高考阅卷特点：
1. 阅卷时间短； 2.阅卷的速度快； 3.阅卷老师的心理状态：给分中庸平均分 15 4. 高考卷其余部分是标准化计分 ——书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股
15分和小 20多结分的作 文到底差在哪里？
15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括 内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但 句式简单，没有多少亮点。而20多分的作 文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的 句子如人穿的衣服，它已经不是普通校服， 而是李宁、耐克等名牌，所以让人觉得很 “拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很 “拽”的感觉.
4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
原词
替换词
hard
diligently
very
rather extremely
pay attention to attach importance to
happy
delighted enjoyable
more and more the increasing number of
运用高级词汇：
When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般)
At the news of her death, he went…. (高级)
She can’t correctly pronounce the word. (一般)
I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级)
二、主动句与被动句的互换。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★
• The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.
She has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高级)
2，句式多样，文章增“靓”
• 使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构 可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因 此而生辉
• 他昨天下午来的。
• 1.He came here yesterday afternoon.
Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.
2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech.
is true the president will give our school a speech.
• 2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.
• Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.
3.Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般)
高考评分标准
第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达 到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富
的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，
连词使用较好。
第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，达到 了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基 本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句 子所致。
• puters are of great importance in our life.
EX、运用高级词汇：
As a result, the plan failed. (一般)
The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级)
She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般)
英 语 书 面 表 达 指 导
Beautify your Composition
高考作文的华丽变身