1.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文 学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下
（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，中国伟大的爱国者 （patriot to china）。 （2）为了国家，弃医从文。 （3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学(modern Chinese literatrue)的开创者。 （4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、 《祝福》这两部影片。
审题的步骤是什么？
１、信息点整合 ２、主体时态 ３、人称 ４、文体 ５、不要打草稿，但应有提纲
* 语法，句法高分tips
1.A. 概况 : 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通 顺
译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of
D．生平：尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语
译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着 两只大眼睛，留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren,from Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, is a great patriot to China.
C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2）Graduating from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
the greatest doctors in China.
2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China,
was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
1. Lu Xun ,whose real name Zhou Shuren,born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, is a great patriot to China.
基础写作注意事项：
1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白 2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结
果的正确性。 3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档 4）连贯性共占2.5分 5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。 6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。 7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分。 8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。
1)pattern
2)agreement(人称,性别,数,格的)一致
3)number 4)tense 5)spelling
Who will be volunteer to show your composition to the class?
Find out the good sentences in the possible version and DreemaremBrbuecret,hem with your partner I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun.
Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren is a great patriot to China. For the country, he abandoned the study of medicine ,devoted to writing .(he devoted himself to writing after abandoning the study of medicine),because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer, a thinker, and translator, but also the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.So , all the people spoke highly of him and considerde him as one of the greatest novelist in China.
E．评估： 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .
2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
3）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.
Group work:
In groups of 4 or 5, correct or rewrite the composition in ten minutes:
Correct with your partners (How to correct?) 1、是否恰好五句话？ ２、是否每句都含必要信息？ ３、可否自由发挥？ ４、纠错原则：
I’m Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27.After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctor’s degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I .came back this year without any hesitation in 2006.
[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 [评分标准]
句子结ow do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.
_______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ___________________________________________. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming