写作技巧教案初中英语写作技巧指导（一）方法一:善用高级词汇Which is better?1 我喜欢轻音乐，它可以使我放松。
A I like quiet music. It can make me relaxed.B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.2 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。
A It rained heavily. So he didn ’t catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.3 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can ’t carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.4 我们必须采取措施来拯救地球，这样才能过上更好的生活。
A We must do something to help save the earth. Then we will have a betterlife.B The more we do to help save our planet, the better life we will have.1. The weather was good, and our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man.We all think he is such a great man that…3.The students there needn’t pay for their books .Books are free for the students there.方法二:活用多种句型 健康很重要。
在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。
人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。
根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审(search)travel stay at home visit friends or parents work 牛刀小试（一）审（二）列（List ）根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。
•如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲• A lot of people travel.•Some people stay at home.•Some other people visit friends or parents.• A few people work.•Enjoy your vacation.（三）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。
•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮•How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.•Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.（the ending）（四）连(connect)•How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.•According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.•Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.（五）美(beautify)We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.图表类作文常用语：1.如图所示或从图表中我们可以清楚的看到……It can be seen from the table/chart/diagram…that…As is shown in the chart/table/diagram…It’s clear from the table/chart/diagram that…From the above table…, we can see clearly…2.Many students, about 42%, like to study English in Australia.3.40% of the students like/have interest in/are fond of ….4. a small number of students…./ a small percentage of students…5.As the saying goes, “…….”方法三:妙用关联词书面表达的衔接与连贯合理使用表示各种逻辑关系的过渡语使用过渡语是实现书面表达语言连贯性最常用的方法之一。
过渡语(也称衔接语)是连接句子或段落的媒介。
合理地使用过渡语,可以使整篇文章结构紧凑，行文流畅，从而增强表达效果。
现将中学阶段常用的过渡语总结如下:I 表示起始的过渡语:•At first, first of all, to begin with, according to,as for 等.如:•To begin with，we should remember, I think，that most people cannot choose their careers.II 表示时间关系的过渡语:•At first, then, later, finally, since then, as soon as, meanwhile, the next moment, now, before, after, soon, first, next, one day等。
如: •1)After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.•2) As for myself, I will study hard to improve myself and serve the society.Meanwhile, I shall learn from others and give a hand once there is a need for help.III 表示空间关系的过渡语•on the right/left, to the right/left of,on one side of... on the other side of...,at the foot/top/end of , in the middle/center of,at the back of, close to, near by, next to, opposite to 等。
如:•On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands a new building --our library .IV 表示因果的过渡语•for，because of, thanks to, for one reason; for another reason, One reason is that …another reason is that…so, therefore, as a result (of...) 等。
如:•1)One(suggestion)is to give our dear teacher an album, for every student's picture is contained in it.V 表示对照的过渡语•but, still, however, otherwise, while, after all 等。