对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。 Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I can’t make it to Beijing with you as we have planned.
高考英语作文的润色与提高
Sophia 盘山县高级中学
专题一：优秀作文的基本特征
优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征
1、层次不乱 3、亮点若干 4、蠢错不犯
2、句式多变 3、巧妙串联 6、整洁卷面
开头：第一个要点 层次不乱 主体：第二个要点
结尾：第三个要点
句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...
蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。
1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
起：first of all, to begin with, above all...
巧妙串联
承：in addition, besides... 转：however, on the other hand...
有则改之，无则加勉； 用心则易，无心则难。
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
第一反应测试： 他是个好人。
He is a good man.
generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, easy-going, devoted, open-minded, modest, friendly…
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高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
2.时态、语态混用 Last night, I had enjoyed a party. The painting on the wal∧l damaged seriously. was
3.句子成分残缺
I stood up and saw therwe∧aasboy. The young man∧running in the street.
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14.中式英语 Next week have a party. I sorry you I can't with you go Beijing.
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
英文书写大方、圆润、自然
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
专题二
肃清基础语言错误
中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误：
1.主谓不一致 My father and I likes going fishing by the lake.
Large quantities of soil has been washed away.
11.动词原形作主语/宾语 Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didn't feel like take a walk.
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12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致 Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man.
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高考英语作文的润色与提高课件（共5 0张）
13.一个简单句出现两个谓语
There was no work to do, he went back home. being
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4.习惯搭配误用
I once heard from the animal like this. of
We passed away the building. by
5.名词单、复数不分 I made many friend in the summer camp. We can get some informations from the Internet.
We'll hold a party on next Sunday.
8.近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform.
I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
9.基本词汇拼写错误 I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly.
10.前后人称不一致 The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it.
6.动词单、复数不分 Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work.
Mr. Smith, together with some students, are coming to our school.
7.赘词现象多发 I hope you can return back to our school soon.