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beginning body
ending
detail sentence1 detail sentence2 detail sentence3 closing sentence topic sentence
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A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.____ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants……. ____zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. ____zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. ______________.
Sport analyst Bill Walton said, “Yao Ming has the potential the capability of changing the future of basketball.”
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Success Criteria (目标达成要求)
□1.I can write a strong topic sentence. □ 2.I can write three detail sentences. □ 3.I can write a closing sentence.
Yao Ming was born in Shanghai in September, 1980. His mother was a center and captain of the Chinese National Women’s Team. His father played basketball, too.
Task1: Underline the topic sentence.
Task2:*Add transitional words or phrases for detail sentences.(添加过渡语)
*Write a closing sentional Words(过渡语）
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Learning Target (学习目标)
We are learning how to write a
paragraph to show ideas.
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段落 paragraph
Yao Ming, the center of the Chinese National Men’s Basketball Team, served the Huston Rockets in the 2002 NBA. The 2.26 m, 120 kg center becomes the first one to come from a foreign team.
□ 4.I can use words or phrases to make the ideas more clear.
□ 5.I can check my grammar, spelling and punctuation(, . ! …) after writing.
G/N G-Good N-needs improvement
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Writing
请写一个段落列举至少三种保 持健康的方式。要求使用过渡 语以及topic, detail ,closing sentences
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请写一个段落列举至少三种保持健 康的方式。要求使用过渡语以及 topic, detail ,closing sentences
___________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
表示总结 closing
in a word, in short , as a result
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Task 3:Reread the paragraph for mistakes and correct them.
A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.____ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants……. ____zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. ____zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. ______________.
detail1
表示层次 detail2
first, firstly, first of all, to begin (start )with,
second，secondly, then, next, after that, besides, what’s more
detail3
third, thirdly, finally, lastly, at last，in the end