④your own opinion/suggestions : tense-- 一般现在时、一般将来时
2007年广东省英语高考题基础写作
上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名
学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：
偶像 女生 伟人 18% 父母 25% 影视明星 50%
男生 18% 11% 14%
Reasons:
1.The reason for…is that… 2.One may think of the change as a result of… 3.The change in…largely results from the fact that…
4.There are several causes for this significant growth in….First,….Second,… 5.This brings out the important fact that…
常用句型：
Facts:
1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in… 2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in… 3.It is 20% lower/higher than… 4.The number /rate has nearly doubled, as against that of last year. 5.The number is …times as much as that of…. 6.It increases/rises/decreases/reduces by…/…% / two thirds. 7.By comparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell from…to…
Warming up
图表式作文的几种形式:
一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事 物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图
Graph
表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
Pie Chart 饼状图
Increase, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach, remain, by/to, slowly, slightly, gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of…, from…to及比较 级，倍数句型等。
审题：（格式/人称/时态/要点/篇章结构） 篇章结构： ①summary: 对象、内容、时间
tense — 一般过去时
②facts : 描述抓关键；对比的写法 tense– 有明确过去时间状语 用过去时； 无明确年份，反映一种普遍现象或介绍情 况的 用现在时
③reasons：出现某种现象的原因 tense--- 一般现在时、一般过去时
பைடு நூலகம் 第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。
常用词汇： 1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking 2.It’s clear from the chart that… 3.In summary, it is important… 4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that… 5.Obviously, if we want to…,it is necessary… 6.There is no doubt that attention must be paid…
Item
1994
Food
65%
Clothing 8%
Recreation 3%
1995
60% 9% 5%
1996
48% 12% 7%
1997
42% 15% 8%
1998
35% 17% 10%
Others Total
24% 26% 33% 35% 38% 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
Table
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
Bar Chart / Graph 柱状图
图表式作文写作分三步: 第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题 常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe// tell, show, represent等
常用句型： 1.The graph/chart/table above shows … 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that... 3. As is shown in the graph, ... 4.The chart/table shows the differences between…
第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写 （在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类 式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注 意层次。 即 facts and reasons 常用转折，对比及比较的词汇： While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as…as, the same as, be similar to, difference between, among, more than, less than 常用描写趋势变化的词汇：
[写作内容]
根据以上数据，写一篇短 文，包括以下内容：
1．调查时间、调查问题以 及调查对象；
2．男女生在以明星为偶像 方面的差异；
3．“父母”在男女生偶像 体育明星 6% 48% 中的排序差异；
4．男女生在以伟人为偶像 没有偶像 1% 9% 方面的异同；
5．你的偶像及理由。
Last week, we had a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, 18% of the girls choose “great figures”, that is, the percentage of the boys is the same as that of the girls. My mother is my idol, because she not only gave birth to me, has brought me up and loves me but also supports our poor family.