第一段：
As described from the chart, we can see that dramatic changes/differences with regard to/on + n. have taken place in recent years. According to the figures above, +1个简单句( 关于最大或者最小值), while +1简单句（中间数值）.
Most amazingly, +1个简单句。

第二段:
What makes the fact that +重复上一句. As far as I am concerned/from my perspective, there are two important reasons leading to/making/causing/contributing to/resulting in it.
First of all, the most important factor is + 1个名
第一个原因: 工作/经验
1.....experience, for/because of job
2. Accumulating work experience/accumulation of ....
3. Decisive role of accumulating work experience in job-hunting, job-market
方向+对象
方向:代表大道理(表示积极或者消极的三个句型,足矣.)
对象:大四
Experience plays a positive role in job-hunting.
对象：自由发挥
正。

反。

总结。

各一句
Therefore/so/as a result, the seniors need working experience to find a good job. On the contrary/otherwise, they will lose job in the severe/competitive job market.That’s why .......
Therefore, the seniors need working experience to weapon themselves in the pursuit of a decent position. So that they can be outstanding enough to be the best candidate in the competitive job markets.
脱颖而出：outstanding, stand out, above average, superior, prominent, excel in, elite
Secondly, one thing we shouldn’t deny is +1个名词
Making money
For the improvement of living standard
Financial reason
方向+对象
Finance is likely to put a beneficial impact on students’ education.
So, some students are from poor family. Their parents can’t support the tuition. That’s why they need part-time jobs to afford the fees.
3+1+2(一句话，3句话)
万能结尾：
From the above discussion, we can conclude/predict/know that this trend/situation will continue in the near future.。