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高中英语说明文写作(公开课)


经验总结
1.仔细审题,列举大纲。
2.围绕要点,写出句子。
3.添加过度,确保连贯。
4.先求正确,再求灵活。 5.认真眷写,卷面整洁。
Nothing is impossible!
2012年体育盛事—奥运会是在伦敦举行的。你校 一年一度的英语体育节将至,请你根据以下表格内容, 用英语写一篇介绍伦敦的文章,张贴在体育节的宣传 栏上。 [写作内容]
15-20!

中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 [写作内容] 概况 天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南,总面积8.24万平方千米 , 人口约3千万 天气多变,时常下雨 交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多,火锅名扬天下 景点很多, 风光旖旎,吸引了四方游客。
3. 它的人口近3千万。
has a population of
4.重庆的天气多变,时常下雨。 5. 重庆的交通便利发达。
6. 重庆的特色小吃很多,火锅名扬天下。
7. 重庆的景点很多,风景旖旎,吸引了四方游客。
1.重庆位于中国西南 Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. 2. 它的总面积是8.24万平方千米 It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. 3. 它的人口近3千万。 It has a population of near 30 million. 4.重庆的天气多变,时常下雨。 Chongqing’s weather is changeable and rains a lot.
5. 重庆的交通便利发达。 Chongqing’s transportation is convenient and advanced. 6. 重庆的特色小吃很多,火锅名扬天下。 Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world. 7. 重庆的景点很多,风景旖旎,吸引了四方游客。 Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
10-15!
Any problems with this passage? 1. monotonous sentence patterns (句式单一,多简单句,少复合句) 2.Not coherent.(不连贯)
第四关:合并单句
Tips 1. 2. 3. 4. 连接词 定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句
第五关:连句成篇
Linking words(连接词) first, second, third….
besides, in addition, also…
as for…
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce our city to you. Chongqing, which covers an area of 82400 square kilometers, is located in the southwest part of China. It has a population of near 30 million. The weather here is changeable and rains a lot. As for the transportation here, it is very advanced and convenient. Chongqing is also known for its delicious foods. There are many special foods here, among which hot pot is very famous all over the world. In addition, as Chongqing has many scenic spots and beautiful scenery, it attracts a large number of tourists from different places. I hope you can enjoy your stay in Chongqing. Thank you.
第一关:正确审题
1、审语境
中国加入 WTO 后……假设你是导游……
读懂语境
2、审人称
假设你是导游……外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
第一人称
3、审时态
Present Simple Tense (一般现在时)
第二关:语言知识
related words/phrases相关词汇/短语 related sentence patterns相关句型
相关句型
1. “某物位于……” sth. lie / be located/ be situated +in/at/on… + 某处 2. “面积”的表达 ①The area of+某地+is+……square kilometers ②某地+covers an area of +……square kilometers 3. “某地有……人口” 某地 has a population of …

中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 [写作内容] 概况 天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南,总面积8.24万平方千米 , 人口约3千万 天气多变,时常下雨 交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多,火锅名扬天下 景点很多, 风光旖旎,吸引了四方游客。
1. Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. (定语从句)
Chongqing, which covers an area of 82400 square kilometers, is located in the southwest part of China.
相关词汇和短语
位于 面积 多变 交通 便利发达 饮食 特色小吃 lie / be located/be situated area changeable transportation convenient and advanced foods special foods
火锅 名扬天下
hot pot
3. Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places. (状语从句) As Chongqing has many scenic spots and beautiful scenery, it attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
位于中国西南,总面积8.24万平方千米 , 人口约3千万 天气多变,时常下雨 交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多,火锅名扬天下 景点很多, 风光旖旎,吸引了四方游客。
要求: 1. 80 词左右; 2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce our city to you. ____________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________
Expository Writing (说明文写作)
The purpose of expository writing is to explain or give the reader information to help him understand the world.

中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 [写作内容] 概况 天气 交通 饮食 旅游
be famous all over the world
旅游业
景点
tourist industry
places of interest / scenic spots/ tourist attractions
风光旖旎 四方游客
beautiful scenery
tourist from different places
2. Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world.(定语从句) There are many special foods here, among which hot pot is very famous all over the world.
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