welcome
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Writing
By Zhanபைடு நூலகம் Hui
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Ⅰ. Discussion
What makes a good essay?
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感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
? clever ? → wise ? → smart ? → bright ? → intelligent
As far as I am concerned , for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are . What's more , our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 5. proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 6. various sentence patterns 用较丰富的
句式
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (2013全国卷)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友 Peter 写封 信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市 开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时 询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号： CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
proper link words 使用恰当的连接词 various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式
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感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
多卷
; 层 次 不 清 ; 得
面 不 整 洁 ; 涂 改
8较
分
多 ;
语
言
错
误
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感知典型范例
——篇章层面2
任字 何数 信不 息够 ，或 不未 得能 分传 。达
no grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误 advanced sentence patterns 使用高级句型 7
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
Yours, Li Hua
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work)
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: Write down the key words
and sentence patterns
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感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
adj. 令人惊奇的
? surprising ? →amazing ? →astonishing
exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
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感知典型范例
——句型层面1
他昨天下午来的。
He came here yesterday afternoon. (not…until) →
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Task 1: person( 人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
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Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
读 者
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——篇章层面3
neat and clean 卷面整洁 well organized 结构合理
the content is complet 内容要完整
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Conclusion: What makes a good essay?
1. neat and clean 卷面整洁 2. complete content 内容完整 3. well organized 结构合理 4. exactly used and advanced words
1. He_d_i_d_n_'t_come here u_n_t_il___yesterday afternoon.
2. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Task 2:Decide the structure Body
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注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing? _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Body
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Looking forward to your reply. Ending