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也不可太唐突，应该有铺垫
不要写
My purpose of this paper is…
My answer of this question is…
In this paper, I will attempt to
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避免观点绝对一般化
some, sometimes, in most cases, generally/ relatively speaking
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主体段
（main body）
如何组段成章
（段落提高）
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好段落的特征
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内容丰富（fullness）、 段落思想统一（unity）、 段落内容连贯（coherence）.
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内容丰富 （fullness）
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什么叫内容丰富
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如何做到内容丰富
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a.逻辑安排上：
多方面、深层次的发展 段落中心
b.细节例子上：
具体、详实
more…(problems) are brought to our attention
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社会方面
As the society advanced, people are attaching much more importance to …
As our society is advancing, people’s demands have become increasingly diversified.
It is true that …
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开头段四个原则
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注意观点的范围
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观点表述要语气坚定， 避免动摇心虚
不要出现：
In my humble opinion… Though many people oppose my view,
I would like to prefer… I am not sure about this, but
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Bible最有力
“Man cannot live by bread alone.” That is a Bible quotation, the truth of which has been recognized for thousands of years. It means that food and drink are not enough to sustain man, that practical things are not sufficient to take man content, and that man has a soul and dreams to the finer things in life
words, nothing is more important
than …(on one’s way to … ) 名言：
… Such is remark of …
One of the greatest men (scientists/ philosophers/ writers) once remarked,
b. 注意使用转承语 transitional words
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段落写作
（基本段落结构）
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开头段 （introduction）
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要达到的写作目的 !
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包含内容：
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a.引言（general statement）
b.观点句（thesis statement）
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开头的方法： （6种）
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段落思想统一
（unity）
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什么叫?
段落思想统一
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如何做到段落思想统一
每段有一个明确的主题句 topic sentence
然后围绕此句展开，起指引写作 方向的作用
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段落内容连贯
（coherence）
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什么叫段落内容
连贯
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如何做到段落内容连贯：
a.在人称、单复数上保持统一 在时态上保持统一
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科技应用方面
As … is widely used in all aspects of life, …
As one of the most important inventions
of the 20th century, … has founded
a wide application in all aspect of our lives
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名人也权威：
“Knowledge is power.” Such is remark of ……
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谚语
也是检验过的真理
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谚语： So goes the old saying
.Just as the old saying goes,
.There is much truth in the old saying… In other
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提出问题
（最具吸力）
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The answer is
negative/ positive
hardly，
Surely
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引用数据：
（最真实，有可信度)
With a population accounting for nearly one quarter of the world’s population, my country China, has been suffering from serious loss of arable land, which now hardly accounts for 7% of
overall arable land of the world.
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下定义 （最直观，一目了然）
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Pets refer to the animals kept
in house,
like cats, dogs, birds, and even
snakes or lizards
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引用
名言.谚语 等
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第1种：
开门见山（最保险）Fra bibliotek.20
第2种： 现象法（最常见）
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经济方面
With the development/ growth of economy, …
As the economy is rapidly developing, …
With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, …