Useful Sentence Patterns
The phenomenon of …isn’t rare these days. It presents the conflict between…and… The picture is the exact reflection of a common phenomenon in China, which is… This satirical cartoon indicates vividly a kind of common phenomenon among… At first glance, it mocks the…but after some thinking, it’s easy to see that…
3. Give your opinions
Remember: Topic sentences Supporting sentences
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Ending
To put it in a nutshell, we should pay attention to… All in all, the key to… lies in.... I do hope that… Though our economy is…, we should still bear in mind that… With our joint efforts/As long as…, I am sure that such ….will be eliminated I believe with the …, …will be created… What the picture shows is really worthy of our concern. For both …and …, more emphasis should be laontent
Language
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As is vividly shown in the picture, a waiter is dealing with a typical Chinese meal after it has been finished, wearing an embarrassed expression. A complete duck and fish are being dumped as leftovers.
叙述并分析漫画所反映的问题，并谈谈你的看法
眼科 ophthalmology
Writing Guidance (Cartoons)
3 Criteria: Content Language Structure
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1. Read & Describe
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This picture left us some food for thought. Nowadays, so many people are completely unconscious of how hard these resources come, and always take it for granted as long as enough money is paid.
Useful Transitional Sentences
Analyze reasons: As far as the causes are concerned, it is …that is to blame for … From my point of view, it is …that results in the phenomenon. As far as I’m concerned, this …is very shortsighted because… As for the reasons, …
Add or revise your interpretation
眼科 ophthalmology
The picture is the exact reflection of a common phenomenon in China. The majority of children now have access to varieties of hi-tech devices, which leads to a rapid increase in the number of short-sighted children.
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There is no doubt that the picture reveals an unpleasant and selfish behaviour, which is a typical example of unqualified public moral values.
What does this picture want to tell us?
眼科 ophthalmology
Useful Sentence Patterns
After seeing the picture, I cannot help falling into deep thought. I think what the picture reveals is a social phenomenon that… It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. There is no doubt that the picture reveals… which is common among many Chinese citizens, even the … The …in the picture is not alone. It is a typical example of…
Useful Transitional Sentences
Provide solutions: As far as I am concerned, this trend should be put to an end… From my perspective, we can get rid of such trouble by acting on the steps as follows. To effectively ease the problem, I suggest that… Efforts from ….are desperately needed to stop such a trend. It is high time that we took action to get rid of …. It is up to …to help….
3. Give your opinions
What do “opinions” involve?
3. Give your opinions
Why does this particular phenomenon need our attention? (The importance/The impact) Why do you think this phenomenon occur? (Reasons) What are your suggestions? (Solutions)
A good beginning is half done.
What is the next step?
2. __I_n_t_e_r_p_re_t__the picture
Why does the cartoonist draw such a cartoon? Because he wants to draw attention to the phenomenon which commonly occurs in society.
Describe the picture
As is depicted in this picture, four children are sitting outside the ophthalmology department and eating an apple. The four children all have the same eye problem due to too much exposure to the electronic products, such as iPad, iPhone, and so forth, which astonishes even the doctors.
Useful Transitional Sentences
Emphasize importance: Judging from the pictures, I’d like to express my point of view that … has a great impact on … It is known to all that …and it will influence the children’s characters and values of … China is a nation which lays great emphasis on …, so… From my perspective, parents’ interference /involvement may serve as an obstacle to children’s … …not only brings greater risks of …, but also does harm to… In my opinion, it is understandable that…, but it may result in…