2. 数的不一致
• Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them. • [j1]wise man前面应加上a/the • 单数可数名词不可单独存在，要么 加限定词，要么变复数 • [j2]seek应改为seeks
3-时态错误
• Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
六. 措词毛病 (Troubles in Diction)
• Students must know how to apply a computer.
• People can touch many new things on the Internet.
七. 累赘(Redundancy)
• 言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余 的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。 能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不 用从句或句子。
九、表达习惯错误
• A room often lives 6-8 students. • I think this great change has three reasons. • The prices of the food are too expensive. • The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.
• I wish you can consider my suggests.
• If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.
三.句子结构错误 Mistakes in sentence structure
十、综合性语言错误 (Comprehensive Misusage)
• 所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指 除了上述错误以外，还有诸如时 态，语态，标点符号，大小写等 方面的错误。
语态错误
• I have excited several days at the news that you will come here. • Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall. • Great changes have been taken place in our country.
五.不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)
• 例1． There are many ways we get to know the outside world. • 改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. • 或：There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
按句子的结构可分三种：
1) 简单句 2) 并列句 3) 复合句
1）简单句：只有一个主语（或并列
主语）和一个谓语（或并列谓语）。
He often reads English in the morning. Listening to music and watching films can help students improve English. She likes watching English films and often watches hit movies in the evening.
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7．非谓语动词错误
Let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you. Do exercise in the morning is good for one’s health. Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.
英语句子的基本结构
• 写作常见错误分析
一． 不一致 （Disagreements）
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• 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它 还包括了数的不一致 时态不一致 及代词不一致等．
1.主谓不一致
When one have money ,he can do what he want to .
• → Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
改为：Diligent and caring people use money only to buy what they need.
八. 不连贯(Incoherence)
• 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或 是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛 病。
• 例1． The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. • 改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
并列句的分类
1、表示连接两个同等概念，常用and, not only…but also…, neither…nor…, then等连接。 The teacher’s name is Smith, and the student’s name is John.

2、表示选择，常用的连词有or, either…or…, otherwise等。 Hurry up, or you’ll miss the train.
• In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. • 改为：In spite of his l1． For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
• →Increasing number of people with a wanting of better education or trying to develop their personal career prefer badly to live in the big cities because they can provide people with better living conditions including job, housing ,medical attention, nursing and education
2) 并列句： 句型：简单句+并列连词/分号+简单句

并列句是由两个或两个以上的简单句连接 而成。并列句中的各简单句意义同等重要， 相互之间没有从属关系，是平行并列的关 系。它们之间用连词或分号连结。 You help him and he helps you. The future is bright; the road is tortuous.

3）复合句：含有两个或两个以上主谓 结构的句子。这种结构中，必定有 一个主谓结构是句子的主句部分， 而另一个主谓结构则是句子的次要 部分，即从句部分。 句型 主句+连词+从句； 连词+从句+主句
The foreign visitors took a lot of pictures when they were at the Great Wall. As is known to all, China is getting more and more powerful. (As 引导 一个定语从句) Where there is a will, there is a way. (Where引导一个表地点的状语从句)

3、表示转折，常用的连词有but, yet, while等。 He was a little man with thick glasses, but he had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting.

4、表因果关系，常用的连词有so, for等。 August is the time of the year for rice harvest, so every day I work from dawn until dark.
6. 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）
• E.g.: There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
• 改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper.

拉长主谓宾，加上定状补
(添油加醋法 )
E.g.：
People prefer to live in the big cities. People ___ prefer to live in the big cities. ___ People ___ prefer ___ to live in the big cities .
四． 悬垂修饰语 （Dangling Modifiers）
• 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句 子的逻辑关系混乱不清
• 例1． To do well in college, good grades are essential. • To do well in college, a student needs good grades.