冀教版小升初六年级英语作文集锦审题过程1. 时态:主要考虑四种时态:一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。

要根据题意判断正确的时态。

注意:一篇作文可以不止一种时态。

2. 人称:主要有第一人称和第三人称。

审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。

1) 如使用第三人称，需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，动词后需加s或es。

如:She likes playing ping-pong.2) 写作过程中注意代词的格式。

如: He (主格) feels tired. I like him. (宾格)This is his (形代) bike. That’s not your book, It’s mine. (名代)复数形式:Their English teacher is very funny. They often play football together.3. 结构:使文章有条理的方法1) 使用时间词语衔接:如写过去时的作文:Last Sunday; Last Weekend; MyHoliday等作文题目示例时态时间结构衔接词Last Sunday 过去时 in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening, Last Weekend 过去时 on Saturday morning (afternoon),on Sunday morning (afternoon),My Holiday 过去时on Monday, on Tuesday, on Wednesday…st ndrdon the 1day, on the 2, on the 3… last daySunday Plan 将来时 in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening2) 总起句和结尾句前后呼应。

4. 容易出错的句型:1) be动词和行为动词: 同一个句子只能出现一种(现在进行时除外)错误: I was went to the park last Sunday. (把was去掉)2) like + 动词ing形式。

I like going shopping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)3) 三单句子: She goes to school on foot every day. 动词后加s(或es)!4) There be句型There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are)范文:1. 过去时:(动词用过去式)Last WeekendI was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I went to the park with mygrandparents. We went fishing there. In the afternoon, I playedping-pong withmy friends. It was funny! On Sunday morning, I read books and did my homeworkat home. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. In the evening, Iplayed chess with my father. I was very happy last weekend.12. 将来时: (be going to +动词原形或 will + 动词原形)be goingto=willSunday PlanI am going to have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I am going to the parkwith my grandparents. We will go fishing there. In the afternoon, I am going toplay ping-pong with my friends. Then we will go to the cinema. In the evening, Iam going to read books and do my homework at home. Then I will play chesswith my father. It will be a funny day!3. 一般现在时: (第一人称:动词用原形)My SundayI have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I often go the park with mygrandparents. Sometimes we go fishing there. In the afternoon, I often playping-pong with my friends. Then we go to the cinema. In the evening, I often readbooks and do my homework at home. Then I often play chess with my father.Sunday is fun!4. 一般现在时: (三单:注意人称、动词+S)My familyThere are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He likes playingfootball. He is very kind. My mother is a teacher. She often reads books in theevening. I am a student. I like playing computer games and do sports with myfriends. I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend. I love my family verymuch.My weekendI think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and aChinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like readingstory-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and mylittle brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I lovemy weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.My teacherNearly all my classmates like to learning English. Do you know why?I think it's because we have a very good teacher-Wuping.Wuping is an English teacher. Miss Wu comes from Shanghai, She iskind and always smiles, She is one of the best teachers in our school. She goes to work early every day, Miss Wu is2always very busy ,She often has much work to do. She teaches so well, She often tells us to do our homework carefully, She asks us to study hard, We often do as she says, She gets on very well with us. Sometimes she teaches us English songs. I’m so lucky to be her student.My friendI have a lot of friends, but I have only a few good friends. One of them is my best friend. We are both twelve years old. He is fat and tall. He likes to eat oranges and meat. He is very straight and generous. We always help each other. He is a nice boy and his math is very good. He likes to play football and basketball. I enjoy playing with him because I can learn a lot from him. He can always come up with smart answers to those difficult questions. We usually play together after school in the afternoon. He is very funny and sometimes he tells me some interesting stories but sometimes he sets me up. After all we get along well. Butsometimes we fight each other. His goal is to be a math teacher. Helives in LinShan and I live in Xiangshan. But we are good friends.My holidayI had a long holiday for May Day .I was very happy, because I could do anything I want.During those days. I enjoyed myself. At first, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals. And then, I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very interesting. Secondly I went for a trip with my parents, we went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat delicious food there. We rode horse on the grassland and had a fun with local children. It was very exciting. After that, I held a party and invited some of my best friends to visit my house. My mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us, we also took many photos on the party.My familyI have a good family.We are very helpful at home. What can we do? My father is great. He can cook the meals, clean the bedroom, wash the clothes and do the dishes. He is very cool! My mother is very good. She can cook the meals, empty the trash, sweep the floor, clean the bedroom, water the flowers, wash the clothes and do the dishes, too. What can I do? I am helpful. I can sweep the floor, empty the trash, set the table, make the bed and wash the clothes. And there is more! Can I cook the meals? No, I can’t, but I’d like to have a try!My schoolI have a beautiful school.In the spring, the weather become warmer and warmer. And the trees become green. Some birds are singing on the trees. The flowers are open. Some butterflies are fly over the flowers.In the fall, the weather is windy. The leaves of trees likebutterflies are in the sky. What a beautiful school is! I like my school.Summer holidayIt was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have two months to do things we love to do. Weare free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have3been very tired after hard studying.In summer holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.My favorite animalI like animals very much, such as horses, monkeys, cats, tigers andso on. But I like dogs best. Why? Because they are very cute andfriendly.I have a white dog. Its name is Bobo. She is a female dog. She comes from Beijing, China. She has two big eyes and a small month. She wears white clothes. She often walks around at home. It has nothing to do. Shelikes eating ice-cream so much, So do I. When I eat ice-cream, she will look at the ice-cream carefully. So I will give her some to eat.I think Bobo is the cutest dog in the world.My healthy lifestyleI am pretty healthy. I exercise ever day, usually when I come home from school. My eating habits are pretty good. I try to eat a lot of vegetables. And I drink milk every day .Of course, I love junk food ,too.I eat it once a mouth. But, I never drink coffee. So you see, I lookafter my healthy lifestyle. My healthy lifestyle helps me to get good grades. Good food and exercise help me to study better.My favorite teacherMy favorite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a small red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favorite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.This is my favorite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.My familyLook! The girl in red is me. I'm Tian Mengyuan. My English name is Wendy. Please call me Wendy, because I like it. I'm tall and thin. My eyes are big. My hair is short. I like reading, skating, drawing and English. I'm very clever. I'm the top student in my class. All the teachers and classmates like me and I like them, too.The man on the right is my father. He is also very tall. He's handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. My father is an English teacher of a middle school. Sometimes we learn English together. Myfather likes basketball. He is good at it. He always plays basketball with his workmates.The woman on the left is my mother. In my eyes, she's very beautiful. She is tall, too. My mother has a round face, two big eyes and a small nose. Her hair is long. My mother is a doctor. She works very hard. She likes smiling. She's very kind. I think my mother is a good housewife. She can make delicious dinner and she can do the housework well. Sometimes I help her.4I have a happy family. I like my father and my mother.WinterAlthough winter means cold weather, I love it all the same. I think winter is a beautiful season, especially when it snows. Snowflakes fall down naughtily. They fall on branches of trees, on roofs of houses andon wheat fields. Soon the whole earth will be dressed in white.Everything is shining in the sun. Every time it snows, I will remember an old saying, "Winter has come, can spring be far away?"My villageMy village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!My Pencil-boxI have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a verybeautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. It’s a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. There are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.I love my bedroomI have a bedroom .It is not big, but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom. A yellow dog is on the bed .Every night I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is on the desk .I like the bear lamp. It’s cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. Ihave a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.I like my bedroom. Do you like it?我的新学校I have moved to my new school since September. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. It's quite different from my old school. It's larger, much more modern. This is why I love my new school. If you are free, you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look.开学见闻It's the first day of school once again. Stepping into the gate of the school always reminds me of the responsibility I carry as a student. Being a student is not just about attending classes and showing up during examinations. I’m here to be empowered. To gain knowledge is all aboutempowerment. And wish that someday, I could use that knowledge to make a significant contribution to the society.今年暑假5In this vacations I am going to go to travel in some famous places and I am going to go to visit my grandparents in the village. I am going to learn something different. like example: I know people work in thevillage it is so hard and so tired, they are grow the vegetable, rice and something else it is very difficult.小学的最后一个暑假(the last summer in my elementary school)The last summer in my elementary school is very unforgettable. I remember I will go to another school and have to leave my friends and teachers, I feel sad , but I learned to get together with them to remember the friendship between us, we have a good time and swear to study hard in order to have a bright future.今天的经历(Today’s experience)It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people lovedthem . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I ran to him and said ,” Animals are our good friends and we must take good c are of them .”A Wonderful DayLast November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. Myfriends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at about ten o'clock. We had a very good time on November 24.BirthdayMy birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards,picture books, pens.They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance.We have a good time at the party.I want to be a headmasterI want to be a headmaster when I grow up. I think that’s a good job. My school is in the forest.It’s very beautiful. I go to work by Benz at eight o’clock in the morning. The teachers in my school are kind and patient. They are all hardworking so they get good salary. The children in my school havethree classes in the morning. In the afternoon, they play and pick up mushrooms or strawberries in the forest. They have no homework. They are very happy! At four o’clock in the afternoon, I go home with kinds of mushrooms and fruits in my Benz. They are for my dinner.AnimalsI like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal.It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears.But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.6When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: Woof! Wood!.I like my dog very much.Do you like me?Hello! Everyone. I’m a little rabbit. My name is Hanhan. Look! I’m very lovely. My eyesare red. My ears are long. My hair is white. My tail is short. Ilike carrots very much. I have a good friend. She’s my litt le master. Her name is Zhou Xun. We always play games together. I like her very much and she likes me, too.自我介绍Hi! I am a happy and quiet girl. I am from China. I am twelve years old. I am a pupil. I am in Class Three Grade Four. I have many good friends. I like many pets: the peacock, panda, rabbit and bird. They are lovely. I am tall. I have around face, there are big eyes, small mouth, small nose on my face. I have a black long hair. I like eating apples, bananas, chicken and...I like music, singing, running, pinting...I often say: Book is my good friend. I like it! Who am I? Yes, my name is Lv Enhui.Do you like me?My Good FriendZhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts , music and so on. She has a lot ofhobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together andhelp each other.My ParentsMy parents work in a shoe factory. They get up at five thirty. They first get breakfast ready. Then they go to work by bus. They work there from eight to five.They come home at about six and prepare super for us. Mother washes clothes in the evening, Father often makes toys for toysfor us.They are busy all day.我的妈妈My mother is 38 years old, but she never tells others how old she is. She says she just doesn’t want them to know about it! My mother is a well-known doctor in our area. She works hard. She often gets up very early in the morning and rushes to the hospital to look after her patients. She is kind to her patients and treats them the way she treats her family. Sometimes I wonder whom she loves more, her patients or me.我的爸爸My father is 40 years old. He has short hair, big eyes and a small mouth. He is my best friend. My father is a teacher. He is very busy. He doesn’t have any holidays or weekends. Every morning he goes to school very early and stays with his students until late in the afternoon. It seems that he never gets tired! His students love and respect him.My new teacherMy new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, twobig eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown7pants, with two big shoes。