读后续写练习II When I was a little girl, every time my dad was repairing something,
he would ask me to hold the hammer, and meanwhile, have a conversation with me. I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out. All he did after work was taking care of his family.
I grew up and left home for college and since then, my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning, no matter what. Several years later I bought a house, which my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat. All he asked was for me to talk to him. But I was always busy, unable to find any time for conversation with him. One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual. I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things we discussed lately. I was in a hurry, so our conversation was short. Later that day came a call saying my father was in hospital.
Para.1 When I was a little girl, every time my dad was repairing something, he would ask me to hold the hammer, and nwhile, have a conversation with me. I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out. All he did after work was taking care of his family.
Main idea: When I grew up,my dad want to talk to me .But I was busy, unable to have a conversation with him
Step 1. Read the passage Para.3 One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual. I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things we discussed lately. I was in a hurry, so our conversation was short. Later that day came a call saying my father was in hospital.
• 参考词汇： • pass away, die(vi), dead(adj.), lose sb. • regret doing sth.后悔做过某事， • find sb.lying on the bed, • burst into tears, burst out crying, • only then did I realize ... • get over the illness, recover from the illness, • my heart is broken. selfless, • be worried about, be concerned about
Main idea: When I was a little girl my dad like to have a conversation with me,who takes care of my family.
Step 1. Read the passage
Para2.I grew up and left home for college and since then, my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning, no matter what. Several years later I bought a house, which my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat. All he asked was for me to talk to him. But I was always busy, unable to find any time for conversation with him.
how to get the main idea
• When? • Where? • Who? • what? • Why? • how?
Basic forms of the 6 questions
• When did the story happen? • Where did the story happen? • Who is the main character? • What happened in the story? • Why was the matter caused? • How was the matter solved/ended?
Possible version 2:
• By the time I got to hospital, my father had passed away. Now it was he who did not have time for a conversation with me. I realized how little I know about my dad, his deepest thoughts and dreams. After his death I learned more about him, and even more about myself.（53字）
Possible version 1:
• When I rushed to hospital, I found my dad lying there, weak and hopless. Holding back the tears, I talked to him gently. His face lit up . Only then did I realize the conversation was more than conversation . It was love .I was grateful that my father got over the illness and now it is I who always enjoy starting the coversation.(62字）
Step 3. Predict possible plot development
In a group predict how the story will develop:
To predict doesn’t mean you can write whatever you like. Continuation writing must be designed in a logical and reasonable way. And on top of that being creative will be appreciated.
• When? when I was a little girl • Where? • Who? my dad,I • What? have a conversation with me • Why? • How? …my dad takes care of my family…
Step 1. Read the passage
Step 1. Read the passage Step 2. Get the main idea
(who? When? Where? What? Why? How?) Step 3. Predict the possible plot development
(the plot, logical,reasonable, the given two sentences) Step 4. Begin to write(the underlined words) Step 5. Polish your writing(词汇、句式、语法的多样性)
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。
第五档 (21-25)
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词 语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些 错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
How to write a continuation?
Step 4. Polish your writing
句式结构：简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。
语法结构：主虚被拟动语语气态的、使非用谓情语况动。词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、 常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。
Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad 注意：