❖ 如果我被接受,我一定会尽力干好工作.(人物 介绍)
❖ If I am accepted, I’ll surely try my every effort to do the job well.
❖ 过去，人们过着贫困而简单的生活。 （新 旧变化）
❖ 4.In the past, people led/lived a poor and simple life.
China, which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean, is rich in natural resources. It is a great country with a long history, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.
How to use advanced expressions
In my opinion, it is difficult to hold the Olympics.allenging to hold the Olympics.
It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing.
far-reaching \ profound \ significant
促进\ 繁荣经济\旅游发展
Tourism is becoming a booming industry with the development of the city.
Holding the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy, making the city more booming and modern.
China will enjoy a boom in economy.
Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of the construction of our modern society.
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expressions
1.Among all the people going to work, car drivers make up 18%. amount to account for
2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks. complete accomplish fulfill get through
过渡词的使用
❖ 过渡词是一种关系指引词，一般由副词或起副 词作用的短语承担。此外，代词、连词、上下 文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥 梁”，在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用，学 会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑，启、 承、转、合，过渡自然，融会贯通，连成一体。
❖ .为了使得生态平衡,我们要保护野生动物. (新 旧变化)
❖ In order to keep balance of nature, we should protect wild animals/wildlife.
❖ 多达百分之四十的男孩喜欢在网上打游戏。 (观点讨论)
❖ As many as 40 percent of the boys like playing games on line.
What’s more, more people will be attracted to Beijing, which will contribute to the development of tourism to a great extent.
使用 with 结构
When the number of tourists is increasing, traffic will become more crowded.
China, a large country with a long history, lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean. It is abundant in natural resources, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.
其他注意事项：
❖ （1） 字迹清楚，书写流利。 ❖ （2）审题 认真，符合要求，文章观点明确。 ❖ （3）句子既要生动，又要简明扼要。 ❖ （4）尽量避免重复使用相同句型，词汇和短语
学会使用丰富的句式
使用分词
Once it is held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.
使用被动句
Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.
使用倒装结构
Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games.
二、学会使用较高级词汇
用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基 础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现 出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得 高分。
❖ .为了丰富学生的课外生活,学生会将组织一次 邮票展览. (格式套用语)
❖ In order to enrich the students’ out-of-class life, the students’ union will held this stamp show.
❖ To enrich the students’ s out-of-class life, the students’ union will held the stamp show.
10. More and more people come to big cities, which causes serious housing problems.
flood into crowd into pour into
practice
❖ 随着家庭收入的增加，越来越多的人们能买 起个人电脑，空调，手提电脑和数码相机等 等。（新旧变化）
❖ Recently, I have made a survey among 200 students about their future jobs. Half of them are boys and half of them are girls.
❖ (I have surveyed among 200 students about…Half of them… and the rest…)
❖ 我写这封信,申请你们在报纸广告中招聘的职 位。我认为我适合这工作。(求职)
❖ I write this letter, applying for the post you offered ( offered ) on the ads in the newspaper.
❖ I think I am fit/suitable for this position.
❖ (They lived poorly and simply.)
❖ 绝大部分的学生上网只是聊天,打游戏或者看 电影。只有少数学生是我为了搜索信息或者 国内外新闻. (观点讨论)
❖ Most of the students who are on net are just to have a chat, play games or see films.
Many pollution problems can be more serious, which can eventually do damage
to our surroundings.
More visitors from all over the world will flood into China, which financially benefit Beijing.
With the number of tourists increasing, traffic will become more crowded.
With more and more visitors going to Beijing, tourism will be flourishing .
With everyone doing his bit, the game will be a great success.
❖ Only a few students on net are just to seek information or learn about news both at home and abroad.
❖ 最近，我在200个学生中作了一个关于他们未 来工作的调查。其中一半是男生，一半是女 生。 （观点讨论）
8. It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams. acquire obtain gain 9. It would take me a great deal of time, which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me.undoubtedly definitely unquestionably
❖ 随着中国经济的发展和中国的进入WTO，越 来越多的轿车将进入普通家庭。
❖ With the development of the Chinese economy and China’s entry into WTO, more and more cars will enter/ go into ordinary families.