写作课PPT课件
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Homework
Copy the writing sample and polish your own work.
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Changjiang River and mountains, Wanzhou takes on a
delightful look.
On a Sunday morning, we went on a trip to the Taibai
Hill, where we saw kinds of colorful flowers. Arriving at the
our knowledge our mind different culture ourselves our life
假如你是李华,上周跟同学去万州旅行,请
根据以下要点写一篇旅行日志。 要点如下:
•地理位置 •印象深刻的人、物等 •旅行感受。 注意:100词左右;可适当增加细节。
Writing
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Unit 5 Writing
who when
A travel journal
where
feeling what
Structure of a travel journal
Para1: who when where(location)
Structure Para2: what
scenery food
river. At night, we had a fantastic dinner and what impressed
us most was the tasty Wanzhou Grilled Fish.
Wanzhou, with its attractive scenery, various food and her
top, we enjoyed a splendid view of the whole city. After lunch,
we decided to take a boat trip along the Changjiang River. It
was amazing to find many local people washing clothes by the
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在别人的演说中思考,在自己的故事里成长
Thinking In Other People‘S Speeches,Growing Up In Your Own Story
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书写工整 要点齐全 较少的语法错误 语言得体 行文连贯 词汇丰富、句式多变
sample
A trip to Wanzhou
Last month I went to Wanzhou with many other teachers.
Situated in the northeast of Chongqing and surrounded by the
people ......
Para3: feeling
Person: I / we Tense: the past and present
Location
s
Wanzhou Senior Middle School
v
lies/ is is located is situated
on the top of the hill in the east of ...
is surrounded by mountains …
Wanzhou Senior Middle School is surrounded by thick forests.
Scenery
I enjoyed a _w_o_n_d_e_r_fu_l_ scenery from the hill top. The _c_h_a_rm__in_g_ scenery attracted me most. I found the scenery _a_tt_r_ac_t_iv_e__. The __am__a_zi_n_g__ scenery made me amazed. What imperssed me deeply was the _s_p_le_n_d_i_d_
night view.
Food
The food tastes / is
nice good tasty delicious
fantastic
People
Hale Waihona Puke People arewarm-hearted kind-hearted easy-going frank
enthusiastic
Feeling
broaden experience relax enrich increase