衔接
句子的衔接非常重要，有人用了这样一个 比方，汉语就象竹子，一截一截的，铿锵 有力；英语象大树，一片一片，连接紧密。 在英语的文中，不能象汉语那样只靠逻辑 关系来衔接各个段落和句子，必须有过渡 性词汇 。虽然有很多，但你也用不着全部 学会，掌握一两套就够了。
关公曰：“酒且斟下，某去便来！”出 帐提刀，飞身上马。众诸侯听得关外鼓 声大振，喊声大举，如天摧地塌，岳撼 山崩，众皆失惊。正欲探听，鸾铃响， 马到中军，云长提华雄之头，掷于地 上——其酒尚温。
January 12th, 2002
Dear Mr. President,
I’m a student in the English department of our university. I’m writing to tell you some problems with the canteen
First, the price is too high. We have to pay thee or four Yuan for a single dish. That is really too much for us students. As I know, some of my classmates come from countryside or rural areas; some have parents who are laid-off workers. They are even short of tuition fees, how can they afford such expensive meals?
Since most students live and study on campus, I sincerely hope you will pay more attention to our life here,
especially our canteen service. All of us will quite appreciate it if you help to improve the service. Thank you!
英语作文应试技巧
所谓作文
作文，它是听说读写里最容易拿高分的 项目，因为不懂的地方你完全可以回避 过去。因此,要树立这样一个目标：任何 级别的作文考试你至少要拿到80%以上 的分数。而要做到这一点，仅仅需要花 还不够背1000个单词的时间。
同意？
本来就是嘛，下面看好了——
不同意啊？
也许才听到这种说法有点让人接受不了 吧，但很多人都做得到哦，所以更需要 看看这个课件了，是不是？
文体和卷面
书面正式文体和平常所写的略有差别。比如 I am就不能写成I’m，最好彻底不用简写。还有 格式，可以采用的是英美国家今年来流行的格 式，抬头不加空格、段与段之间空一行，这样 写的好处是可以掩盖你的字迹混乱，而给人一 种清爽的感觉。作文毕竟是要靠老师主观评价 的，卷面太差明显要吃亏。
缩进式
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Mr. President,
January 12th, 2002
I’m a student in the English department of our university. I’m writing to tell you some problems with the canteen service on campus and my own suggestions on how to improve it.
service on campus and my own suggestions on how to improve it.
First, the price is too high. We have to pay thee or four Yuan for a single dish. That is really too much for us
第三步
在一个星期后，拿出你的中文，照着写 一篇英文出来，那时候你就会明白为什 么要把文章按那种要求翻译了。
第四步
比较原文和你写的文章，对比差距。然 后好作文的标准去评价、去感受，当然 现在要开始背经典句型。为什么没早让 你背，因为你那时候没个对比，感受不 深，背起来事倍功半。
第五步
再等一个星期，再来一次。
Since most students live and study on campus, I sincerely hope you will pay more attention to our life here, especially our canteen service. All of us will quite appreciate it if you help to improve the service. Thank you!
知道什么是好作文吗？
看看这三个句子，你觉得哪句最象能拿 高分的样子？
例句A
More and more students want to get a parttime job, because they need much money.
例句B
The number of students who want to get a part-time job has been increasing, because they have to spend more money.
小结
一般来说，一篇文章这时候你就吸收得 差不多了。就我感觉，任一类型的文章 你只需要三五篇就足够，当然，学会写 作和在三十分钟之内完成一篇完美的作 品之间还是有一定差距的，但那就是实 践功夫了。
六级满分作文
（注意看下划线部分的文字哦）
Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Lung increasing, the number of students, they want to get a part-time job, has been rising.
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
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什么呀，再想想
你的语感可能有问题哦~
Second, the service is not quite good. The dining hall is small, old and dirty, with flies and mosquitoes everywhere. The waiters don’t seem to like their jobs and act lazily. Many of us feel no appetite in such a kind of dining hall.
students. As I know, some of my classmates come from countryside or rural areas; some have parents who are laid-off
workers. They are even short of tuition fees, how can they afford such expensive meals?
答对了！
有什么根据？该不是蒙的吧？
Menu
定义
在你有足够的鉴赏能力之前，请记住： 一篇好的作文是由被动语态、抽象名词、 独立主格加上复杂得乱七八糟的从句组 成。
亮点
考试考的是你的语言表达能力而非你的思想， 所以，当你内心赞同某个观点但却有几个关键 单词不会写的时候，你完全可以转为反对它。 当然，你若是掌握了几个特别好的用法，也可 以使文章的内容去将就这几句话。因为一篇没 有大错误的文章里，必须一两个亮点才能得高 分。
Second, the service is not quite good. The dining hall is small, old and dirty, with flies and mosquitoes
everywhere. The waiters don’t seem to like their jobs and act lazily. Many of us feel no appetite in such a kind of
As for my suggestions, I think we should have more than one canteen on our campus. With competitions among them, their quality of food and service will surely be improved.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
具体实施
一般来说，在掌握了以上的原则之后， 还需要按照一定方法才能取得比较好的 效果。
第一步
先把一篇好的范文看懂，把自己认为写 得好的地方体会一下，背几个你认为漂 亮的单词。
第二步
翻译，将全文翻译成比较“土”的中文，比如： The CALL is such a course rich in use that I think there are more functions than you can afford time to learn. 可以翻译为：CALL用途广泛，你恐怕 学不全的。胆子放大点，在这里不是考你的翻 译能力，不要求很准确；而是练习把英文表达 换成自己习惯的中文表达。把被动翻成主动、 复杂句打散，以符合自己的思维习惯为原则。
英文短句
I hiked yesterday. The weather was bad. But I was very happy. I want to do this in the future. And I prefer to go in sunshine.
附加：In addition… Moreover… Also… Likewise… Furthermore… Even…