携手共进，齐创精品工程
Thank You
世界触手可及
Judge by yourself
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本
读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子
读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
List the key points（列文章要点）
Opening: （开头）tell the main idea
sing and dance, I would like to tell stories, because I’m strong in
cook some delicious food,
I’d like to visit old people at the old people’s home Because caring for old people is our Chinese tradition.
clean their rooms I could volunteer my time to read newspaper
chat with old people
I’d like to help clean up the city parks
pick up the rubbish I could help
Ending: （结尾）sum up
I will be a great volunteer.
Good model:
The old saying “Many hands make light work” reminds us that we can try to help others in need. I like helping people. If I have a chance to be a volunteer, I would like to go to hospital and cheer up the sick kids. First of all, I like singing, I want to put this love to good use by singing. What’s more, I would like to help them with their homework. Because I am good at teaching. Finally, I could volunteer my time to set up a volunteer project to help them. I will hand out some ads to call more people to join me. If everyone can share a little love, the world will be better and better!
sweep the roads then the world will be better and better.
I’d like to help students in the school
I love … , I want to put this love to good use by helping students with their schoolwork painting volunteering in an after-school study program
Can you write?
Task:如果你有机会成为一名志愿者去贡献爱心，你愿意帮助别
人吗？你会选择做第一档（13-15分）
(审)
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思
I would like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital.
Body: （主体） how to do it
I would like to sing for kids. I would like to help them with their homework. I will set up a volunteer project.
We learn: 1. How to offer help. 2. How to help people in need.
If everyone share a little love , the world will be better!
1.Review the whole lesson 2.Write a composition: How to be a great volunteer?
人教版英语八年级Unit-2写作课
Cheer up sick children
Clean up the city parks
volunteers
Work in an old people’s home
Help kids with homework Give out some old books
I’d like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital