连词成句
many tourists, traffic jam There are many tourists and it causes traffic jams.
连词成句

good environment in the suburbs The environment in the suburbs is good.

过渡词语
递进关系 what’s more, besides; in fact; … I don’t want to go skating; besides, the ice is too thin.

过渡词语

因果关系 because, since, as, for… so, therefore, thus, as a result…
过渡词语
概括性词语 in short, in a word; generally speaking; … In a word, it is important for us to learn English.

连句成篇
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. My classmates had different ideas. Some agreed to the idea of moving out. Because they thought there are many tourists and it causes traffic jams. What’s more, the environment in the suburbs is good. But some disagreed. First, it was built in 1906 and is well-known. Moving may cause the death of some animals as well. Yours truly, Li Hua
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审题：文体，主体时态和人称； 考虑篇章结构; 确定要点，写出相关英语词语； 根据所列词语，写出句子； 连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适 当增加细节。
2.赞成/反对迁 agree/disagree to move out 出 3.游客多， 交通堵塞 many tourists, traffic jam
英语词语
4.郊区环境好
good environment in the suburbs
5.建于1906年， built in 1906,well-known 中外闻名
过渡词语
时间顺序 first, second, next, then, finally; at first, in the beginning; after that, afterwards; at last, in the end; … At first, I had a running nose. Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever.
连词成句

建于1906年，中外闻名. It was built in 1906 and is wellknown.
连词成句

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搬迁易造成动物死亡. Moving may cause the death of some animals.
连句成篇
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. My classmates had different ideas. Some agreed to the idea of moving out. There are many tourists and it causes traffic jams. The environment in the suburbs is good. Some disagreed. It was built in 1906 and is well-known. Moving may cause the death of some animals. Yours truly, Li Hua

假设你是李华，最近国内一 家英文报纸正在讨论北京 动物园是否应迁出市区。以 下是你所在班级讨论的情况。 请你给该报写一封信，反映 讨论结果。
赞成迁出：
反对迁出：
1．游客多， 1．建于1906年， 交通堵塞 中外闻名 2．郊区环 2．搬迁易造成动 境好 物死亡
英语词语
1.不同观点 different ideas
6.搬迁易造成动 cause death of the animals 物死亡
连词成句
different ideas They/My classmates have different ideas.
连词成句

agree/disagree to move out They agreed/disagreed to the idea of moving out.
假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京 动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。 请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。 赞成迁出： 反对迁出： 1．游客多，交 1．建于1906年， 通堵塞 中外闻名 2．郊区环境好 2．搬迁易造成动物 死亡
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文体: 书信 主体时态: 一般过去/现在时 主体人称: 第三人称
篇章结构
Dear Editor , Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about… Yours truly, Li Hua
确定要点
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
不同观点 赞成/反对迁出 游客多，交通堵 塞 郊区环境好 建于1906年，中 外闻名 搬迁易造成动物 死亡