写作笔记评分标准:一、审题二、描述(主要指小作文,小作文不可以添加任何评论性言语)三、论点、论证能力(大作文的论点控制在2-3个左右)四、清晰的表达能力大作文结构:开头段落(50个字左右):背景信息(2-3句话)个人观点(个人观点控制在一句话左右,务必简单明确)个人观点分为三种:同意反对中立(完全中立和偏向性中立)主体段落(150个字左右):2-3个自然段每个自然段:开头第一句话为主题句第二句话至末尾为论述句结尾段落(50个字左右):suggestion or restatement 建议或者重述(3-4句话) 主流题型:PROBLEM/SOLUTION1、Beginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(概括)Body:问题以及解决方法分别陈列P1 P2 P3 …S1 S2 S3Conclusion: Restatement(重申时不要引出新话题)2、Beginning:同上Body:每个问题各写一段进行详细陈述P1 P2 P3Conclusion:总写解决方案S1 S2 S3例子:课本24页Nowadays, more and more children are becoming obese. Give possible reasons and suggestions.AGREE OR DISAGREE/ADVANTAGE OR DISADVANTAGEBeginning: Background InformationYour Opinion(中立具有偏向性)Body: 三分之一篇幅写与自己相反的观点三分之二篇幅写与自己相同的观点先写反,后写正,中间一行过渡段。
Conclusion: Suggestion例子:课本37页Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主流话题:年轻人(30102,P6)It is right that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members. But they should pay all the full cost. To what extent you agree or disagree?女性话题(90 P3)A recent research indicated that the rate of crimes committed by young females has been on the rise all over the world. Please give some possible reasons for this sudden increase in crime rate. Also, make some suggestions on how to deal with this social phenomenon.公众类话题(08奥运,体育91 P3)Last year many famous sports professionals earned millions of dollars each. On the other hand, most people in some “ordinary” professions like nurses, doctors and teachers earn only a small fraction of the incomes of these “start”. What do you think about sports stars receiving very high salaries? Is it fair that people with jobs that directly help people are paid much less?科技类话题(98 P4)传统科技模式与现代科技模式的冲突Some people say that the age of book is over and all information will be presented by video, computer, television, film, etc. However, others think that books and the written words will still be necessary for spreading information and completing education. What is your opinion about this issue?环境类话题(79 P3)Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in the urban areas of most big cities. Do you think it is true? Give some suggestions for the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish.教育类话题(119 P5)In most universities there are a very small number of male students in certain majors like tourism while females students in many science subjects are hard to be found. Therefore, some people think that universities should enroll equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give your reasons.媒体类话题(30109 P6)The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?国家类话题(100 P4)(110 P5)Many people think that countries in the world have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that financial aid to poor countries is often misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.(30106 旅游重点)Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people form different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?当一个考题涉及一个事物的两个侧面,写作原则必须是中立带有偏向性的观点。
开头段写作方法:一、注意事项:开头段不宜过长,控制在5句话内。
不要直接提出对于问题的解决方案,而是应该类似这样表达:My arguments for this point are listed as follows:二、转换技巧:将题目中文字转换为开头段,不可以照抄题目,而是应该将题目中的单词用另外表达方式,陈列在开头段,转化有以下三种方法:主谓宾------ 主系表主动句------ 被动句近义词互换例如,题目如下:At present it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?利用转化技巧写的开头段如下:Nowadays college students often have difficulty in finding a satisfactory job when they graduate. A large number of people are of the opinion that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.三、开头段写法:1、定义法:A、解释某一单词的意义B、引用题目部分内容进行改写C、提出个人观点定义法注意事项:定义的单词必须与主题相关,所选取进行定义的单词必须方便定义,不可太抽象。
例如,题目如下:Creative artists should be given extra freedom to express their ideas(words, pictures, music and films). However, some people think the government should put some restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion.定义法写作的开头段如下:Art is always regarded as abstract and symbolic works which need people’s imagination and originality. Therefore, many people argue that artists should be given additional freedom to fully express their creativity through characteristic words, pictures, music or films. From my point of view, I think somewhat differently.2、提问法:A、提出和个人观点相反的问题B、做出回答C、提出个人观点例如,题目如下:Many countries establish a system of single-sex education in which boys and girls go to separate schools. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it. 提问法写作的开头段如下:Should students be separated into single-sex schools to spend their childhood? Many par ents’ answer is “yes” because they see many advantages for a segregated education. However, I can’t endure a single-sex education system.3、名人名言法,不建议使用。