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雅思新东方写作笔记整理

一、概括:1.写作考试介绍:Time: 60mins 20mins TASK1 150words40mins TASK2 250words2.考试题型:TASK1Process 和Introduction 题目罕见出现。

TASK2I. DiscussEg: 2005年7月9日Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people do not think it the government’s responsibility. Discuss both and give your opinion.II. Advantages and DisadvantagesEg: 2005年5月14日Some school leavers go to travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?III. Agree or DisagreeEg: 2005年6月25日People think that the news media has influenced people’s lives nowadays, and it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?IV. Your OpinionEg: 2005年3月5日Some academic subjects are useful for children’s future career while others such as music and sports are not so useful. What is your opinion. Give your reasons.V. Problem, Reasons and SolutionsEg: 2005年1月22日Statistics suggest that nowadays an increasing number of crimes are committed by the young people. Explain the reasons for this and give solutions.二、小作文解析(T ASK 1):1.通用格式:⑴OPENING—1SENTENCE--- A. Paraphrase 5W& B. Overall trendⅠ.Line phasesⅡ.Pie classificationⅢ.Bar the gap between A&Be.g. The graphs and charts tell us a clear overview of the characteristics and trends of……It can be seen from the table that…..详细见白书P6/下,“Referable IELTS Writing opening &writing”●RULE 1:A.不可以抄题目B.不可以写“According to ….”,只能写“In that figure….”C.不可以写“below/following”D.不可以写“that/this”E.第一段不出现数据⑵ENDING--- 1SENTENCE--- A. Repetition / FeatureB. Hidden characteristics(查找图表等中的隐性特质)e.g. What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages exceeded100%.It can be indicated that some adults chose several seasons forstudy.C. Exception (All rise, with the exception of A, a decline by…..) 拿高分的同位语D. No ending (多可爱的结尾啊,当然前提是字数够了)⑶BODY --- 6-8SENTENCES A. 整体趋势:分阶段描述(白书P7)e.g. The number of marriage in Scotland fell very sharply between 1960 and 1970, andcontinued to decline until around 1985 though at a slower rate. From 1985onwards there was a gradual increase in the number of marriage which leveled offin 1984.B.导入数据方式:整体趋势+数字(白书P8)●RULE 2:A.不可以有Objective (主观意见)B.不可以出现“cause\therefore\thus\hence”C.不可以用“I/We”等D.用TIME(时间)做主语会有高分e.g. The past decade saw/witnessed a dramatic/moderate/gentle increase of sth.白书P11/ Recite increase n / a.b.c●RULE 3: CAREFULB.用1分钟—看Rubric、X/Y轴、单位、图例、排列顺序。

C.精确性—图例中常常出现technical tramp,特别表现在数据的描述上。

若某一年份的数值指向不明确,不可以绝对化。

以“before\after\approximately\nearly”代替●RULE 4: 时态一般现在时(开头)(结论)/ 一般过去时(如1998年等过去的年份)当有过去与将来时同时出现,则通篇使用一般现在时。

2.各个击破⑴PIE CHART1 PIE 见示例多PIE Different topic , 各写各的,隐蔽的significant 放在最后e.g. The total losses equal the total inputs to maintain a balance within thebody. (红书P81)The same topic示例:Single pie(分类) classification --- 比例大小\图例性质\COUNTRIES(发达\发展中)\TRENDS\合并相似项\相反项Ranking (排名)(蛋糕占得最大的是老大,要单独列开)白书P12. … dominated…./… occupied the majority of…..剩下的( the remaining of sth….)占(be\make up\amount to \ account for\ stand at) …%(可以改为分数,nine of the ten\a lion’s share)( 线图中也可使用)Transition ( 并列\递进\比较与对照…….)Some piesA.找绝对值(MAX\MIN)B.找相对值( 增长中\下降中MAX&MIN,不变值)方式1: 80’s 与90’s 各写一段方式2:上升\下降各写一段红书p74/78 参考⑵TABLE \表格(往往可以转换成线图来写)A.Extreme (描述最高点与最低点)e.g. The general trend of the visits abroad by UK residents for holiday was surging comparatively dramatically, reaching a peak at 20700 in 1998 and bottoming out at 14898 in 1995.B.Range (最大-最小约等于整数时适用)e.g. Visits abroad by UK residents by business surged gently within a range of approximately 800.C.Average (用于相对平稳的数值变化)e.g. Visits abroad by UK residents for other reasons surged and subsided evenly averaging out at nearly 1000.D.Similaritye.g. This is the case with the trend of total.POINT: 找出表格中数值的SIMILARITY\DIFFERENCE.⑶BAR \柱形图(白书P19)A.年份+单根柱(等同于线图)B.东西+单根柱(等同于饼图)C.年份/东西+多根柱a.年份+多根柱---- 找出共同点与不同点,比较异同.b.东西+年份+多根柱---- 年份+单根柱(线图) p19⑷Line chart\线图将线条分成几个阶段来说:A.Physical --- 有持平阶段,单独列开; 有跌有涨则放在一起.B.Situational—根据情形来分割线,例如: London underground station,可按照上下班时间等来分割.parative P22/ timber\ pulp\ paper (三条不同走向的线)1st, 做比较(一头一尾, 头: timber>pulp>paper….)2nd, 各管各的说, timber : rage and …..pulp: 在paper之上paper: 与pulp 相似⑸Process /流程图A. 跟着走B.图上的词都可以抄C.Sequential first/ next/finallyBefore/after/once。

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