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高中英语概要写作实战


•Task list: •We are going to.... •1. Find out the key points and basic structure of the passage • 2. Draw the mindmap • 3. Write a summary of the passage
Other cities also share similar problems. In Nanjing, three people died and 2,473 were injured in road accidents related to food delivery workers in the same period, according to the Ministry of Public Security.
Problem-solving pattern:
What---Why---How 问题解决型文章
2.Find out the key points and the supporting details.
要点精准提取(主要点+支撑要点)
WHAT :Para.1-3 It’s a common sight to see food delivery workers___i_g_n_o_r_e_/_b_r_e_a_k____traffic laws.
高中英语概要写作实战 (problem-solving pattern) Delivery Workers Asked
to Take More Care
Part 1 Warming up
1. what?
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2. Why?
2.Why?
3. How?
Delivery Workers Asked to Take More Care
Let's Draw the mindmap of the passage
mindmap
3.Rewrite the passage by your own words and pay attention to the integrality,logic and coherence. 语意和逻辑统领下的同义转换(句型+词汇), 兼顾成文后的连贯性。
Other cities also share similar problems. In Nanjing, three people died and 2,473 were injured in road accidents related to food delivery workers in the same period, according to the Ministry of Public Security.
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核心话题(关键字)的提取,并大致掌握文章结构。
The basic structure of the passage: para.1-3_W_ha_t ____ para. 4-7_W_hy_____ para.8 _H_ow_____
basic structure of the reading passage.
(find the topic) 核心话题(关键字)的提取,并大致掌握文章结 构。
In the first half of this year, food delivery workers had 76 traffic accidents in Shanghai alone, according to the Shanghai Public Security Bureau. This means that on average, there is a food delivery worker that gets hurt or even dies on the road in Shanghai every 2.5 days.
To solve the problem, some cities have taken action. Shanghai has asked companies to train their workers on traffic rules and safety. Now in Shenzhen, if a delivery worker gets caught breaking traffic rules more than twice, he or she will be banned from driving food delivery vehicles for a whole year.
In the first half of this year, food delivery drivers had 76 traffic accidents in Shanghai alone, according to the Shanghai Public Security Bureau. This means that on average, there is a food delivery worker that gets hurt or even dies on the road in Shanghai every 2.5 days.
deliverymen have to ignore traffic laws from time to time,” he told the newspaper. While most companies have measures requiring delivery workers to follow traffic rules, “there remains a problem of whether these requirements
• 3.Rewrite the passage by your own words and pay • attention to the integrality,logic and coherence. • 语意和逻辑统领下的同义转换(句型+词汇),兼顾 • 成文后的连贯性。
1. Find out the main idea and the
companies offering high salaries to attract new workers. However, food delivery workers are often under high pressure from their employers. They face company fines of 20 yuan for delivering food late and upwards of 200 yuan for receiving complaints, reported CRI. Moreover, the more orders they take, the more commission (佣金) they can earn, leading to some workers checking their mobile phones for new orders while they’re riding their bikes.
news website The Paper.
HOW: para.8
Shanghai:
Shenzhen: train workers
if a delivery worker gets caught breaking traffic rules more than twice, he or she will be banned from driving food delivery vehicles for a whole year.
delivery workers to follow traffic rules, “there remains a problem of whether these requirements and rules for delivery workers are truly entering their ears, brains and hearts,” Wang Liang, deputy (副职) head of the Traffic Police Corps with the Shanghai Public Security Bureau, told news website The Paper. To solve the problem, some cities have taken actionБайду номын сангаас Shanghai has asked companies to train their workers on traffic rules and safety. Now in Shenzhen, if a delivery worker gets caught breaking traffic rules more than twice, he or she will be banned from driving food delivery vehicles for a whole year.
Reason 1______________________________
Reason 2______________________________
Reason 3______________________________
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and rules for delivery workers are truly entering their ears, brains and hearts,” Wang Liang, deputy (副职) head of the Traffic Police Corps with the Shanghai Public Security Bureau, told
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