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公开课王姣姣读后续写如何写记叙文
Out of breath/breathlessly, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “…….”
So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat .
Use transitional 1: words
add some details
Use different structures
He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it.
He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as
……
Main Idea
One day, at Park Avenue, Arthur helped a young man suitcase carry a _______when he was on the way to work. Suddenly, he heard the sound of an alarm and found a robbery happened in the bank. When a young woman ______ looked at his suitcase, he thought he might be mistaken _______for the bank thief. ……
Tip3. Use the key nouns in the given sentences to infer more
information.
Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur……. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. In Paragraph1, Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report to the policeman.”
How to complete
a narrative article (记叙文)
读后续写:
英语科考试说明
提供一篇350词以内的语言材料,原文多是 情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文,要 求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和 所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将
其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节
Use transitional words
(衔接词)
coherent, correct, logical, reasonable, rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern Underline the key words
add some details
Use different structures
Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.
Tip4. Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph.
Key Words: Park Avenue The young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief Paragraph1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”…… Two characters:Arthur and the young man Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station.
Who? When? Where? What? Why? How?
Arthur;a young man one day; when he was on the way to work Park Avenue, near the First National Bank Arthur helped a young man….but ….was mistaken for the bank thief. the suitcase in his hand
Tip5. Use the characters and their actions to infer more information.
Polish your writing Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away.
和结构完整的短文。
After class, you will be able to……
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2.
3.
Read for the main idea/plot Write the end according to the given information Polish your writing
Reading
第二节:读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故 事。 若词数少于130,从总分中扣去2分。 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
How to choose the underlined key words in your writing? How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot? How to make the story coherent and logical?
Tip1: The key words that stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.
Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”……
--therefore, however, in addition/besides, what’s more/furthermore, on the contrary, on the other hand….. feeling:unfortunately, suddenly(all of a sudden), to his joy, worried about....,
soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.”
Then the taxi went away.
The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.
What's the style of the passage? A. Narratio文
C. Argumentation 议论文