一、规律:2000:Describe interpret comment/view2001:Example comment/view2002:Describe interpret comment/view2003:Describe interpret comment/view2004:Describe interpret example2005:Describe interpret comment/viewDescribe :9 Interpret:9 Comment/View:7 Example:2二、核心:语文作文(而不是思想作文)三、字母排查:(主要背动词)A B C D E F GH I J K L M NO P Q R S TU V WX Y Z先背BG,再背Q X Y Z J K,最后背C D I(每个字母花半个月时间),剩下的1个字母3-5天三、写作思路Para1:describe briefly(简要地)角度(3句)→寻找会写的,躲去不会写的词(指n.)1、如图,可以看到+ (题目/名词+地点)2、数量、位置、神态动作3、难道这是作者要告诉我们的吗?当然不是(显然图画中展示了一种内涵)Tip:一个复杂的写法后一定有一个简单的写法(特指名词),而不是看见什么写什么Para2:Interpret 、Purpose1、判断2、归类,判定产生核心词物体---属于哪个部分人物---属于哪个人群3、好坏判断产生句子层次1、开始论述坏:1、一些人没有意识到。
有害/重要2、在经济活动、社会交往和生活中对。
不够重视2、展开阐述:钱多不多节约还是浪费时间提供就业,增加税收方便快捷担负连带责任能够了解到更多信息一种主要的娱乐形式是否保持健康带来压力、焦躁和郁闷是否安全(伤害等)←要细化是否培养健康人格应对未来的挑战和困难竞争中的机会多不多得到的帮助多不多这么做,表现是否改善了做成功的可能性大不大3、结束论述:1、利大还是弊大2、结果好还是坏Tip:我说什么都对Para2: advice / comment /viewØ政府:立法、计划、投资、区域合作Ø社团:支持、监督、反馈Ø媒体:宣传、曝光Ø市民:培养意识、勇于参与、加强自律最后三个词:ØØ持续发展Ø健康和谐生活Tip:随便四、提高效率的策略首段:多背动词二段:多转Logic(逻辑)三段:提前背内容Tip:关联词:(平行、转折)That is / whatis more / still / in a word五、写作流程(40分钟)3-5min 审题:文字暗示+ 好坏判定题目要求套首尾句各段写作:Para 1:原创Para 2:填写Para 3:默写2min 检查:单复数、主谓、时态拼写:字迹工整六、名词策略(第一段)人物:年龄段好与职业段Child: boy /girl /Younger /teenager / man / lady /Elder / senior复述法:大小、功能、特点如:温室:Green houseA small house a warm roomA big room a comfortable roomprotection分拆资源:Resources推卸责任:Push duty海洋资源:Ocean resources环境:Environment / surrounding七、核心词句常见句子结构:Ø名词+ 动词+ 名词(I a worker .)Ø名词+ be + 形容词ØThere be + 名词+ 地点ØIt is importantto take action.Øtoo + adj. + todoØIt is + adj. +that + v.八、例子(2000年)审题:核心词即写作方向题目:Commercial fishingØFish: resourcesØSea: environment / surroundingØboat:要求Para 1: 描述开篇句:The picturesvividly describe + commercial fishing.名词:Fish / boat地点: Sea / ocean数量:More /a lot of数量变化:Increase /decrease尾句:But is this whatthe author means to tell observers? Certainlynot!Para 2: 阐述Fishing companies fail to realizethat excessive fishing is not only harmful, butalso damaging for the environment.They seldom give priority to oceansurrounding in their economic activities.2、展开:Ø这么做钱多不多Ø节约还是浪费时间Ø担负责任3、结尾:这么做利大还是弊大The disadvantages will probably overshadow its benefits.Para 3:选择主语名词:Island authority台湾政府Socialinstitution 社会机构The pressjournalistCitizens(the generalpublic)公众In this way, cana brilliant future be far behind?In this way, abright future must be waving at human beings on the horizon.2000年范文:The pictures abovevividly describe a brief historyof commercial fishing. In 1900, there were a lot of fishes in the sea. On thecontrary, in 1995, there were many fishing boats, and fishes decreased sharply.But is this what the author means to tell theobservers? Certainly not!Simple as thepictures are, they do account for certain social phenomenon, that is, some fishingcompanies fail to realize that excessivefishing is not only harmful, but also damaging. What is more, theyseldom give priority to the environmentprotection. Still, they make a lot of money,but they are responsible for the dramatic decrease of ocean resources. In aword, their action or attitude will probably exert certain negative effects onsustainable development of the ocean surrounding and ocean resources. Thedisadvantages will probably overshadow its benefits. It is importantto take broad measures to put this situation on hold(控制). For one thing, central authority(中央政府), along with certain social institutions(社团), is expected to make comprehensive rules and regulations(法律法规). For another thing, the general public(公众)is supposed to enhancetheir awareness that ocean resources are essential for the environment. Only inthis way can human beings have a brilliant future.九、still 后面的句子钱多不多They benefit(profit) greatly from commercial fishing.节约还是浪费时间They cannot make the most of time; instead,they idle(消磨时间) time away.提供就业,增加税收It can not only secure(获得) employments,but augment(增大)revenue(税收)as well, thus boosting(增加、提高)trade(贸易), production andconsumption(消费).方便快捷It can supplypeople with dominant means of transportationthat can move people and freight(运输) from one region(地区)to another.It can smooth(解决困难) thecommunication between companies and their clients(顾客), or rid of barrier(消除障碍)between residents as well.能够了解到更多信息It can providepeople with an easy access to a bulk of up-to-dateinformation.一种主要的娱乐形式It can be regarded as a majormeans of diversion(娱乐) that can free people from routine work(例行工作), pressure,tension(紧张), burden(负担)or boredom(单调).是否保持健康People can (not)keep fit, physically(身心健康)or mentally(精神上的).带来压力、焦躁和郁闷People willprobably inflict(遭受) with pressure,anxiety, depression, isolation(隔离)or solitude (孤独).是否安全(伤害等)People can (not)secure their food, shelter or job.It can (not) shield(保护)somebody fromhazard(危险), injury, accident.It can guard against(保护、保卫) (safeguard) avariety of offenses(冒犯)from deception(欺骗)fraud to scheme(组织、计划).是否培养健康人格It can (not)cultivate(培养) talent, confidence, self-worth(自尊), self-reliance(自力更生)and dignity(尊严), let alone(更不用说)inspiration(灵感), exploration(搜索)or creation.应对未来的挑战和困难They can (not) dare(敢于面对) challenge, hardship,ordeal(折磨) or tribulation(苦难、灾难).竞争中的机会多不多They can own more (few) opportunities in the competition.得到的帮助多不多They can obtainmore (less) assistance, financial aid(财政资助) or mentalcomfort (心灵爱抚)from their relatives, friends or colleagues.这么做,表现是否改善了They willprobably show more or less better (worse)performance in their jobs or study.做成功的可能性大不大They are more(less) likely to achieve themselves in theirprospective(未来的) career.十、注意尾句的修辞对偶:Rough wind dothshake the darling buds in May.拟人:Should we extendgreeting arms towards future with sincerity and enthusiasm, a harmonies lifemust be waving at us on the horizon.巧用反问:In this way, cana bright future be far behind?十一、巧用举例子把(Para 2)still后的句子用数据和人物串接,虽然有编造之嫌,但是“伪装”的好,同样看起来也很优秀。