雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing 俞伟国－2009－雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排：Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructure Report Writing(From Mat Clark)近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6:15%-20% Band7: <5%Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One－Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略_______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________Part One－Introduction－闪亮开篇－－Version 5.7－Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion(State your position)2. Statement1．主体背景（Background Information）(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step formankind”. However, some people think it made______________________________,when_______________________________________________________________ _he time,thefirstfor_____________________________________________________ that it was a greatstep for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually_____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(笼统概念－缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improvedfertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used todo this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous tohuman health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery.Nevertheless,somepeopleholdthemethodsusedmay____________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）法方（换转型句－三之法方Paraphrase1 ）(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachersshould also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whilesomearguethat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causespollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own experience tosupport your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序：单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Somepeopleproposethat____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think itsbenefits outweigh its disadvantages?_______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法－Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility andalso be punished?Average Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished.Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished exceptthat (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behavebadly.Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to privatesecondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss theboth viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to privatemiddle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-timejobs?_______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________LanguageSkill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report－Introduction写作对策thatphenomenontheToday,_______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article,I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to thefollowing causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord. Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing andstudents are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic－欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two－Body－中流砥柱－－Version 6.5－分论点的要求：1.字数要求：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则：(1). 内容原则：分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为关系。