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2016届二模作文讲评


In order to show your kindness, please prepare some candies. If you like, a small gift is also highly recommended.
We’re scheduled to meet at the bus station on Saturday at 8:00 a.m.. Then we’re going to set out for the children’s home by bus.
In an attempt to make kids happy, we’re going to give performances and tell some amazing stories. The children there are lack of love, so we’re going to try our best to keep them from feeling lonely. What’s more, we can even teach them some practical knowledge that can be put into use in their future lives.
For some reasons, some students are lack of awareness of their own responsibilities, while others simply don’t know how to take action.
To have these problems solved, there are quite a few things can be done. For instance, we should give speeches in school, informing others about the importance of environmental protection. Also we should encourage others to do some practical things like turning off the lights while leaving the room so as to save the power, which will surely be worth the effort.
By doing things above we make our school clean and comfortable, when everyone is healthy and in a good mood. Thus, the necessity of building a green school is undeniable.
Since we are going to stay along with the kids for an entire day, the necessity of playing is undeniable. Playing various of games, singing songs along with them or telling stories with laughters will surely make our day. To crown the whole, regardless of the activities we will do there, creating a positive and relaxing atmosphere should be put into priority, which will help to ease the pain of their terrible experiences and motivate the kids towards life.
2016届二模作文讲评
We are scheduled to meet in front of our school gate at 8:00 a.m. next Saturday. So please be on time or the bus will leave without you.
From my perspective, preparing some small gifts is necessary, which needn’t to be expensive. Indeed, the thoughts behind them really count.
Hope you can come with us.
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